• Published 4th Nov 2016
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The Entity - headless_rainbow



Ghosts have always terrified Fluttershy. Everypony says they aren't real, but now there's one in her house. And it's not here for her fear; it's here for her innocence.

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Great read! A epilogue with some luna x incubas would be nice though. Alternatively a time skip to wrap this up is probably be your best bet.

7697500 An epilogue was considered, and may add one, but I wasn't entirely sure what to do. I went ahead and released the main story because I didn't want to make people wait for me to figure out an epilogue, if I figure one.

Throughout the length of this I was thinking, chanting in my head for someone to call the Ghostbusters.
Until you said it was an incubus in which I called for an exorcist.

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