• Member Since 23rd Jun, 2012
  • offline last seen Jan 27th, 2013

Fluttershy[mlp:fim]


I love ponie and Fimfiction! i have always wanted to write Mlp Fim fanfiction stories! i hope you all like my stories. Alsp please no bad words on my comments. Thank you!

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Fluttershy has been having terrible headaches tat are making her go insane. She can not get rid of them. Can she find a way to ver come her insanity before she hurts herself but worst of all....her friends.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

it took me forever! And i hope you like it! :yay:

You need to space out your paragraph. It hurts to read that monster of a paragraph.

I agree with Chaos. Your formatting needs a bit of editing. Spaced out paragraphs for dialogue and new ideas is important. Other than that this can become quite interesting.

okay i will try that next time thank you for lettng me know:yay:

You need to carry on

Why didn't u finish?:fluttercry:

WTF DID I JUST READ!?

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