Fluttershy has been having terrible headaches tat are making her go insane. She can not get rid of them. Can she find a way to ver come her insanity before she hurts herself but worst of all....her friends.
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Fluttershy has been having terrible headaches tat are making her go insane. She can not get rid of them. Can she find a way to ver come her insanity before she hurts herself but worst of all....her friends.
it took me forever! And i hope you like it!
You need to space out your paragraph. It hurts to read that monster of a paragraph.
I agree with Chaos. Your formatting needs a bit of editing. Spaced out paragraphs for dialogue and new ideas is important. Other than that this can become quite interesting.
okay i will try that next time thank you for lettng me know
You need to carry on
Why didn't u finish?
WTF DID I JUST READ!?