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Penumbra: Ponyture

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HELLKRINDER-NOI

HELLKRINDER-NOI #1 · Aug 28th, 2012 · 1 · · 2 - Silence is Paradise? ·

As A huge fan of the Penumbra Series, I urge you to keep writing this story, I love how its going, Very canon to the game, but I think you can add a little more of your own ideas into it, So far a good read and sad to see that it hasn't recived much love yet

HELLKRINDER-NOI

HELLKRINDER-NOI #2 · Aug 28th, 2012 · 1 · · 2 - Silence is Paradise? ·

Oh, and you should flip the rating to mature, It is not a kids story

MischiefMax

MischiefMax #3 · Aug 29th, 2012 · 1 · · 2 - Silence is Paradise? ·

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Haha. Thank you. I love the Penumbra Series as well.
I will start to put some more of my own ideas into the story as well, so thank you.

HELLKRINDER-NOI

HELLKRINDER-NOI #4 · Aug 29th, 2012 · 1 · · 2 - Silence is Paradise? ·

1180989 Good to hear, subtlety is the the base of Penumbra, I truly love your story, at first Sweetie Bell's appearence in the mine threw me off, as Penumbra emphasizes being alone, but the eerie nature still came through and then some, especially with the hell hound, which by far are the scariest enemy in the game, I hope twilight know she'll be seeing alot more of them