I'm a Brony who lives in Utah. I am a Senior in high school. I love writing, reading, Drawing, camping, sci fi, fantasy, and spending time with my family.
When you start seeing the mane six in your everyday life does that make you crazy, or blessed? This guy doesn't know what to think when he talks to and lives with the mane six at his home all of the sudden. He has to help them figure out what happened and fix it while they try to help him fix and improve his life.
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Wow, the title led me to believe that this was a crossover of A Beautiful Mind, I was sorely disappointing.
7375989 I don't even know what that is and I'm disappointed
Not bad, needs a bit of cleaning up grammar-wise, though.
7376014 It was a really good movie, Russel Crowe and all that.
7376092 who?
It's a start of a new beginning for you. But hopefully you can put some narration in there. A lot of people really don't get that first book will always be not as great but if you can improve then by all means. Make them like it. I like to give at least 3 points for the idea and 2 points for trying your best so 5/10. For a new book average.
7376053 yeah i know. thanks for the imput. This is just my first story. ever.
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7376553 well its a great story. I give u that!!
7376553 Oh, well, okay then. I had a lot of grammar issues on my first too (still do, come to that, seeing as I have not done a full refit and rehaul).
7376553 Even just being more constant with your capitalization would really smooth things out. It doesn't read the most smooth
7376553 UPDATE NOW!!!!
7376553 where have you gone
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7451268 im so sorry it has taken me so long to begin the next chapter, but i started my senior year and my job got very busy. i promise the next chapter will be out by the end of September if not earlier.
7584729 I understand im a freshman
So far not too shabby.
I am now saddened to know that this story will never be completed.