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Well It's a Start.
I Love RWBY. I Look Forward to seeing some more.
Good Luck With the Story, Hope You Update again soon and Finally...Welcome to the Multiverse of the Displace.
interesting idea, wrong person gets the Displacement treatment...
will look at later.
Nice story looking forward to the update!
So he's turned into a female as Yang, lost his original memories but still knows stuff about his world (kinda) and that he was a boy originally, with his memories being replaced with Yang's? Or is it just her personality traits? - Sorry I got a bit lost while processing it to make sense to me. I like your idea and finding it interesting how the story will go
You have caught my attention, I can't wait for more!
Saw the title and immediately thought of Yang from RWBY. Was not dissapointed when I clicked on it.
This looks good so far, I will certainly be keeping an eye on this.
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Not bad, but you should go over this again. There's capitalization errors at the start, should fix that.
7395781 This comment prompted me to do some research, and I have located the spots I believe you are referring to. Corrections shall be made.
A decent windup, and a non-brony in Equestria. I wonder when/if he/she will ever figure out that this world is a girl's kid cartoon. I can't wait, at this rate I'm gonna devour what you've already got up.
KEEP GOING STRONG!!!!!!!
That calm freakingout acceptance sorta thing is hilarious sometimes. XD
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LoL I've seen that movie too
Now that is something everyone can agree on.
Huh. Color me intrigued. I'm not a big fan of Merchant fics, mostly because it's not often that I find one that isn't about someone just straight up god-pwning everyone with ridiculous powers.
And characterization so far is good. It's not just someone being turned into Yang and suddenly acting like her as well. In fact, I could even say he seems to be her opposite. It takes a large shock to throw him off, and he has a very good head on his shoulders as far as I can see. I wonder if he got her Semblance, and her temper as a result.
On the topic of Semblance, Yang is certainly a powerful character in her own right, with Aura, her Counter Semblance, and the Ember Celica gauntlets. However, while powerful, they all require a modicum of skill and management. Her Semblance is basically a one-shot KO, but only if she sets it up properly and doesn't get dead in the process of setting it up. Her Aura is a limited defensive resource, so she has to be careful how many hits she takes, and Ember Celica has limited ammunition despite it's range versatility.
So our displaced human is powerful, but not unfairly so. All in all, I'm eager to keep reading.
8365319 Aside from the limited ammo part, that was exactly my goal. I've seen too many god-tier displaced characters for my liking, so I decided to do something about it and make a more realistic character.
the character is way too honest and trusting so farwho exactly whould act like that in such a situation? most whould definitely freak ou which hasnt happened so far really i hope some of it comes atleast later but not too much
Alright, that's a pretty good pun. I laughed.
It says nothing good if the character starts behaving like a contrarian jerk to the other characters as early as the second chapter. It's already turning me off the story. Those people literally picked you off the ground and fed you the moment they saw you. Be a bit less of an entitled dickweed, man.
8376962I feel the need to remind you that the main reason Yang would say no to modeling for Rarity is that she isn't used to Her new body yet but it worked out fine in the end.
8635043 They are not hats for donkeys. Keep it straight.
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When you get thrown into an unexpected situation, you can either panic or make the most of it. Me, I firmly believe that panic is useless and I will ruthlessly suppress that response in favor of doing something productive. In my opinion, it's nice to see a character that doesn't spend five chapters curled in the fetal position and crying. Five paragraphs is enough.
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well in his (or rather her) case, it would be acceptable, since he turned her around, lost the memories (part of them), is in a world governed by magical animals that can or can not eat human flesh. theories of alterative universes)
so yeah, it would not be too irrational to panic right now
the complete lack of panic, that would be strange and would show that something terribly wrong with him
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maybe the plug has not fallen yet
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Its Beacon, but replace the E with a 3 and add a pound sign. "b3acon#
For those not familiar with RWBY, that really is the Wi-Fi password for Beacon Academy. Also if you want to know more about the character of Yang, Youtube search for RWBY the yellow trailer. Thats the first intro for Yang, and its short so you won't be stuck for 20 minutes or anything.
The Monk
“A spider’s got to spider.” -Scarheart
If I ever got displaced 1 of 3 things would happen
1 curl into ball and cry if turned into female ( I have nothing against the female gender but I am quite happy as a male thank you very much )
2 if sent to anthro thank whatever God's are listening ( bite me it my thing we all have a weird kink )
3 and finally if sent to world with bullshit op powers do everything I can to protect sweet innocent fluttershy ( long may she reign as queen of cute ( amen ) )
That is the most accurate introduced of Pinkie I've ever heard, I approve!
*Struggling not to laugh*
Wtf is with the whole gender bending thing. Like, it’s not a super big deal, but what difference would it have made if the protagonist was female to start with?
I just don’t get it.
10689559 It's one more thing that the protagonist has to get used to and deal with. While a female becoming female character change is perfectly viable, it also lacks the challenges and elements often associated with a male to female change.
I've actually been working on a project that has all four variants of the gender stuff. M2M, F2F, M2F, and F2M. I call it JNPR Berries. No idea when or if I'll publish it.
Raspberry. And there’s only one man who would dare give me the raspberry
LONESTAR!!!
10809467 Look out for the approaching camera!
No era... *saca la voz de the mom de TBOI* ISAAAAAAAAAAAAAAC?!!!!!!!
Is it just me or does the English translation to her name sound like it would be more fitting for Equestria? Sunny Little Dragon, not exactly the weirdest name in Equestria but somewhat fitting nonetheless