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Well It's a Start.
I Love RWBY. I Look Forward to seeing some more.
Good Luck With the Story, Hope You Update again soon and Finally...Welcome to the Multiverse of the Displace.
interesting idea, wrong person gets the Displacement treatment...
will look at later.
Nice story looking forward to the update!
So he's turned into a female as Yang, lost his original memories but still knows stuff about his world (kinda) and that he was a boy originally, with his memories being replaced with Yang's? Or is it just her personality traits? - Sorry I got a bit lost while processing it to make sense to me. I like your idea and finding it interesting how the story will go
You have caught my attention, I can't wait for more!
Saw the title and immediately thought of Yang from RWBY. Was not dissapointed when I clicked on it.
This looks good so far, I will certainly be keeping an eye on this.
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posted a comment on the last chapter only for this one to pop up the next moment. That has never happened to me before. Keep going, I want to see where this leads.
7395329 I had so much positive reception that I decided to go ahead and put up chapter 3. No idea when chapter 4 will go up.
7395393 it doesn't matter how long it takes, you have caught my interest and once that happens I tend to follow things to the end, regardless of how much time passes.
Not bad, but you should go over this again. There's capitalization errors at the start, should fix that.
7395781 This comment prompted me to do some research, and I have located the spots I believe you are referring to. Corrections shall be made.
Well, they have "Quills and Sofas"... Why not "Soups and Suits"?
7396221 Because it's too easy for the soup to mess up the suits. If they're fancy suits, the fabric could be stained. If they're armor suits, then they could rust. If they're lawyers and politicians, then what's going on?
"WHY ARE YOU BUYING CLOTHES AT THE SOUP STORE??"
7396712 "Because Discord asked me to."
7398393 But of course.
Also, take note of when the story was posted.
7398499 Hey, I just came to drop off the song, okay? I don't have time to check dates. Now if you excue me, I am terribly sorry, but I have some other deliveries to make. Toodles!
By the way, first chapter is...okayish. But I never was really a fan of Displaced stories.
7398677 To each, their own.
7398863 Oh no, please don't assume I thought the story was awful! I just haven't personally found Displaced stories to be all that interesting. They were good for a while, but then there was an over-saturation of them, so many of them being written, and it got boring after a while.
But that isn't to say yours was bad. I mean, you should know that already since you're getting a nice amount of views and praise for your work, so well done to you my friend.
May I have permission to call you my friend? Or shall I alter that phrase to my fellow brony sir/madam?
7399609 Acquaintance for now.
I think you should really give I Burn a try. Most of the Displaced fics I've seen have a character being awesome or a legend from the beginning. That's not how this one starts out. The required Pinkie Party doesn't go as normal either.
I guess there's a first for everything, even for Pinkie.
Fluttershy is not amused
YOUR DRILL IS THE DRILL THAT WILL PIERCE THE HEAVENS! JUST WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK I AM?! DONT BELIEVE IN YOURSELF: BELIEVE IN THE ME THAT BELIEVES IN YOU!
...something along those lines?
curse you, that reference has made me want to do a displaced fic despite already trying to do my own. I have two stories that I am trying to get going and now I want to make another. Keep going and I may forgive you.
7400274 I will keep going, so I may earn your forgiveness. Chapters 1-8 are done, 9 will be kind of a filler, and 10 is where some action will start. I have numerous major events planned out, so you can look forward to those.
Can't wait till next chapter
7403048 Yes you can.
Do you want to do a crossover with me?
7424742 Send me details in a note and I will give you a definitive answer.
7425688 ok
I'm wondering more about her (his?) decision on not fighting, changing drastically.
While reading the part of the chapter about dinner, for some reason my brain kept thinking it said omelets instead of casserole, so I was thinking, "Why can't Rarity make hers and Sweetie Belle's with hay and grass, and not Yangs?"
Then I finally realized it said casserole, and realization crashed down like a building.
Also, I kept thinking about people eating grass and dirt... So...
7432803 I already have that planned out. I just have to figure out how to execute the scenes. No spoilers.
7432917 Rest assured, there will be an omelette before chapter 10. It's already written, in fact.
If you ever find yourself falling to your death, you could just scream. You could take a moment to reflect on how much you wish you were somewhere else. Or you could be screaming this.
It is my goal in life (or one of them) that, should I ever be in freefall, this will be the last sound I produce before impact.
A pacifist Yang...
...ufffh...kill me.
7425688 The correct answer to that question is "No." if you are writing the story for your readers. If you're writing it for yourself, go crazy.
Crossover pros:
1) Introduces another, hopefully enjoyable work of fiction that the reader may not be aware of.
2) Acts as an agitator, to create new conflict and character development for the universe that is the focus of the crossover.
3) Provides decent filler for when the artist has writer's block.
Crossover cons:
1) The reader is reading your story to read your story. Crossovers jar one or both stories that readers are invested in and forces them to deal with one they aren't.
2) Story progression is limited to the universe that is the subject of the crossover, meaning it is always at the expense of one of the works participating.
3) The updating rate of all participating stories is limited to a fraction of the rate of the slowest updater in the crossover (IE the time it takes to send back and forth drafts, ideas, communicate, and write, as opposed to simply posting your own material which is godo to go as soon as it's edited).
4) Gaining extradimensional powers from crossovers is generally uninteresting to read. If we wanted stories about characters who have an answer to everything with or without asspulls, we'd be reading Batman or Superman comics.
5) They are filler, and as in point 3, they are filler that limits the rate at which both stories progress.
6) Crossovers are almost always, to put it bluntly, pissing contests between one plot-armored protagonist and another, because if they weren't and one got their ass beaten sideways with any lasting effects, it'd piss the readers of at least one of those stories right off.
7) They are cliche` of the sub-genre and many 'displaced' fics are nothing more than excuses for crossovers. (See The Dungeon Master of Equestria.)
8) The 'Displaced' archetype has existed so long by this point that we've all seen crossovers, both good and bad, and by this point you aren't adding anything particularly original with them to those who have read displaced fics before your own.
You'll notice most of the listed cons only really count for the readers of the fics. Some people like crossovers.. And then some people, bizarre as we are, would prefer to read the goddamn story we clicked on.
... On the note of fighting or not, I heard an interesting... 'philosophy' as far as that goes.
"I am a pacifist in that I do not ever (willingly) fight, because there is never conflict. If I would ever have to resort to violence, I will either not engage, or I will move to kill my opponent or target before they are able to retaliate; whichever the situation merits. If I am unable or unwilling to kill my target, then there is no point in fighting anyway. Only when I am taken by surprise is there conflict, and only then to regain the power to make the decision 'kill, or run'."
The difference between a fighter, and an assassin / executioner.
7434327 The answer I gave him was No, but I did at least give him a fair chance. Unfortunately, I couldn't read any of his Displaced fics. I had an idea that would amount to the shortest Displaced crossover ever as well (easily under 1k words), but since I couldn't read the one he had in mind without getting a headache, I had to turn down his offer.
I suppose then that it''s a good thing I planned out the story without any necessary crossovers. If I do wind up collaborating on one, I'll make sure it impacts the story as little as possible.
7432934
Oh thank Celestia. I was so worried they weren't going to have an omelet!
7432934 will we see potential shipping?
Maybe twilight and yang?
7436169 Shipping outside of parcels and packages has not been considered. Time will tell if Yang gets shipped with anyone.
This yang.....seems depressing
Also I'm hoping yang won't be *ahem* DISARMED in this fic
Heh I pulled a yang
7458500 You also pulled a Vegeta.
7458500 Well, when the guy that got turned into her (in body) is extremely timid and averse to real action, well, that's what happens. I promise, there will be action in chapter 10.
And there are no plans to disarm Yang in either meaning of the phrase.
Nice picture :D
Same I like the Picture can't wait till next chapter