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Cleansing Fire

An ancient illness ravages Spitfire's body, but this isn't the first time she has battled the strange disease. Will she be able to push it back into submission again, or will the fiery pony be lost to the mare of Death?

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datdamnface

datdamnface #1 · Nov 27th, 2011 · · ·

absolutely amazing sir! I hope this isn't a one shot I would love to see you incorporate the other ponies and make this into a real good story

stemofathorn

stemofathorn #2 · Jun 3rd, 2012 · · ·

This is very good! I like the structure, you've got good grammar, and good spelling too! I know it's been over twenty-seven weeks since you posted this, but this could have been an amazing story. Such a shame it was a one shot.