A filly, unable to fly, falls off a cloud. Only one Pegasus is close enough to help, but will she get there in time?
(My first writing endeavor into MLP, very short.)
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There should be a bit more to this, I mean I would love to see what happens when Scootaloo wakes up and Rainbow Dash is by her side.
Still it was a touching short story and I enjoyed reading it from Rainbow's POV.
Please do keep up the good work upon such great tales like this one.
Agreed with the other comment; not much here to comment on. Also, I don't think this is the sort of thing the Random tag is for.