What was thought to be a normal and boring day in Ponyville, turns out to be rather fun. Going to the beach with princess Sunset sounds helluva lot better than staying at home drinking during a heatwave.
For so many of us speaking is a given. We do it every day at a whim or just because we can but what if you couldn't? Vinyl never got that choice she was born with it made for her.
Ozzy Shore, one of the first human settlers in Equestria, starts his new life as Fleur de Lis' new secretary. How will he handle difficult obstacles like his close-minded manager, and living under Canterlot's uptight, social norms?
Don't worry about your grammar it's pretty good so far.
Hmmm its allright
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7308771 thanks! may you see anything worth improving?
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not really, its good but not really my cup of tea
But im still somewhat curious for the next chapter tough
7309993 thank you sir ^_^ I'll try to keep them coming as soon as I can :)
im going to keep an eye on this i like to see where you go with this story
I like this story so far. Please continue soon
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thanks to both I'll try to keep'em coming as fast as I can!
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