The thing about being sucked into random inter denominational portals is that you can only leave once you fixed the problem within. That and it hurts, A LOT. Now, join me, Corbin, on an adventure to try to find a way home before i lose my mind by crossing dimensions, and fighting almost every major enemy in Equestrian history like it was a boss fight! (Health Bar Not Included)
All i wanted to do was hunt.......
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"I looked female" Did you mean "it looked female"?
"I don't say anything as I tackle" Did you mean "I didn't say anything as I tackled"?
Upon further reading, I've noticed more mixing of the past and present tenses, and believe it is intentional.
"the things head" Did you mean "the thing's head"?
"thought I did ask" Did you mean "though I did ask?"
"numbers on there side" Did you mean "numbers on their side"?
"isn't he first time" Did you mean "isn't the first time"?
"it sound crazy" Did you mean "it sounds crazy"?
"'Marionette say, 'Your insane" Did you mean "'Marionette say, 'You're insane"
Lastly, I greatly appreciate that you wrote this story, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
:)
Well sombra may have made his fear come to kinda life but he brought his own doom when the human shot 30 freaking arrows this story is very funny
Please make more