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I love this!
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This is so cool!
Could definitely use an editor or three, and the scenes are rushed. Despite this, I am intrigued. I will follow this story, it has promise.
7160469 i understand. I am trying a new writing technique and plan to finish the way i started. That says nothing of the plot. I simply mean, the way i am writing is directly from my phone. I am trying to work out the kinks with that system. I'll ask a buddy of mine to edit the errors.
the pacing is horrid
7214364 I know that chapter 1 is horribly done. If you read on, you would note each chapter gets progressively better about that. I was working the ideas out on a time crunch and was finishing before i lost track due to interference from life. I hope you try to read further than you had, but wouldn't blame you if you decided against it.