7120691 Yes.

7144929 Nice pun

“After my favorite author, Edgar Allan Poeny.”

eheheh.... Okay, not bad ^-^ Not bad at all.

Fantastic little story! The only other thing I can say about that is, details! Sensory details, what the room/area looks like, what sounds, what smells, etc.

All in all, in the end, this was a brilliant story. Don't let anyone else (Even Hood) tell you different.
~Spirit

I feel as though I offended you with Hood's comment If I did, I am very sorry and I will have a stern talk with him (sort of).

7157842 You did.

7158348
...Oh. Well, shoot. I am so sorry. Listen, it was a brilliant story and I loved it. Hood's opinion is not my own. He's sort of a separate persona inside my head, he's basically all of my condensed negativity. Please don't listen to him. He's rude and has no tact. I usually only look to him for brutal honesty, kind of like Rainbow Dash, but 20% ruder. (poorly timed puns, yaaay... )
I feel so bad, I'm so sorry! I'm still kind of learning about friendship (I grew up learning some poor things about interacting with others), and I guess I screwed up pretty bad... *sniffles* Shoot.
I hope you can somehow forgive me.
Yours,
Spirit

7158438 I'll be alright. *brushes away a tear*

7158444
*cautiously hugs* I... I removed Hood's comment. (He's going to be ticked at me later, but I don't care) I don't know why I really let him in the fir-
...
Celestia damn it, I think he did it on purpose that bucking little- *sighs*
Hood is in no way on my side. He does this kind of thing often, he leads me to ruin every opportunity he can get... But, that's no excuse, I-I should have realized it, I should have known he was trying to- *stops myself, sniffling* I'm sorry... I'm so bucking sorry....
Is there anything, anything at all I can do to make it up to you? Name it and I'll (try to) do it. Anything. I-I owe it to you.

7158463 *reciprocates hug* Well... how about a story where Shattered Heart and one of your ponysonas attend an Applewood Undead concert. (Pun on Hollywood Undead) You write clop?

7158848
...Slight problem with that.... I've no idea what Hollywood Undead is. ;-;

7158960 A rap rock group.