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Chambered


This is what you get when you mix a love for guns with a will to write something down. I'll let you be the judge on whether or not it's good.

Comments ( 18 )

Seems like it could have good potential. Can't wait for me.

Few points I what to cover.
Rainbow is best pony!:rainbowwild:
The story looks interesting ill keep a eye on it to see how this goes.
And fallout 4 is best fallout game! (Yes I went there)

Moving a little fast and the grammar can use some work but over all it looks promising.

7021942 Heresy Fallout 2 is the best fallout game

Nice story so far. It could have slowed down at the beginning, taken more time with the description of surroundings and more overall detail added to it. But that is left to you. :twilightsmile: But even with those points it is a good story with a lot of potential to it. I like it. Keep up the good work :ajsmug:

7021942 P.S. I have played fallout new vegas and they don't kid around about the death claws.... They are FU&KIN everywhere man!!!(game over man! Game over!)... So at one point I'm expecting to see them fight death claws. Also, like the cover art!

7073262
They will fight deathclaws, and the cover art is only temporary.

7556945
Please no name calling in my comments.

This seems like it would be a interesting story, I would like to see how it plays out. Also are you going to include the dlc parts of the game as well?

8580124
Oh, sorry. I forgot this story was up. Yeah... It's been dead. Sorry man.

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