The beginning of a new journey, as we join the mane six for the most interesting and wonderful thing that will ever happen in anypony's life, their best adventure together so far, a pony's wedding.
Focusing on the main development they had before their wedding, that makes this story truly inspirational and worth reading, we set upon their new adventure as we progress through the ups and downs in their relationships trying to learn that the most important things in anypony's life it's what it makes of it.
Chapters (1)
As usual, I start out my comment with some errors
As the flower's Witter is imminent, I think you meant "wither"
hopes.And then discover what happend to them later in their lives. Missed a space. Also, you usually don't start a sentence with the word "And"
a city full of ritches riches
her fellow classmates try not to make any sort of contact with her; becouse they're either
get bullied or laught
She whises to visit
in the world.But they all have
An ordinary picknick can turn into something magical so easy in just seconds when they get together.After all 2 errors
said tickeling Twilight not planning to
but i can't if you don't stop tickeling me!"
Oh! i don't think
Sorry girls but i can't squee, my throat feels dry
voice the best she could, hopping they
Pinkie protested and sighted.
"Sorry Pinkie, but i promise, tomorrow i'll squeak if my throat feels better"
promise? after all she had promised many other things in the past. Sudently she
about their usual stuff.Rainbow with her
"I'm sorry but my i got studies to catch up on"
Alright, I gave up on trying to find errors half-way through. Anyways, I'm very confused on the plot line of this story. Thus far we have been reintroduced into the main characters, the Mane 6 are having a sleep-over at Applejack's farm, and Pinkie has a crush that she cries about for some reason (crush is dying possibly?). Not much to go off of there.
If you want to improve your writing...
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bad grammar, this is actually the first time i've written a story. I even surprised myself when I got a comment on the first chapter 
. Thank you for helping me in finding any mistakes I made writing this story, the truth is i actually wrote this on my vacations with my cellphone, since it has Microsoft Word in it, and this was originally separated into 3 chapters. That's why I might have done many other mistakes on the Fic itself. Sorry 
Sorry about my VERY
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your cellphone?
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