boooo

885437 Instead of just saying boo, you could tell me why you didn't like it and stop being a cunt

885437
dude, to be a good critique, you godda explain what you didnt like, that way, the author can use this to his/her advaniage. just coming on here and saying boo isnt friendly, and its certainly not helpful.

885601 Like a boss...

This story is great but could use the 'alt universe' tag since its a rather .... alternative ... telling of events.

885639 Fair enough

remind me not to touch twilight's horn. i now know it was in a one thousand year old mare's ass hole!

885637 its incomplete

885870 and?

885911 thats it?

886314 Well hurr durr it's incomplete. I have shit to do. I work at 4am every weekday, and I want to hangout with friends and my girlfriend etc... I write when I can, which I can't always do because if I'm not in the mood to write, it's shit quality. There's several other problems I could go on about, but no one gives a fuck so I won't. If that's why you don't like it, be patient. It'll get done.

886314 THE MAN HAS A LIFE! LET HIM LIVE IT!
888335 dont let these comments bring you down. righting takes a clear mind and leveled head, not pressure.

888438 I'm fine :P Feels good to see people come to my aid though XD. I don't care if people don't like my work, I don't expect everyone too. I just hate stupidity and useless hate. If he had simply given a reason, and not made himself look like a jackass, it would have been fine.

Fucking great. I usually don't like lesbian shippings, but I have an exception for this one. Keep it up

888484 dont let that get to you. your story seems fine for now. no pressure, and its your story, you know?

888335 damn 4 am when do you sleep?

889369 I get up at 4, work till about 8. Get home, eat, shower etc.... by then it's probably 9. Then I write if I feel like it, or derp around online. Today I got home, did that, wrote, and I slept for like 3 hours.

888683 Thank you kind sir

889376 WOW

889440 I usually have to slip early or throughout the day. I want to see my GF though, who usually has a fucked up sleep schedule and doesn't get up until like 3-6pm(I'm lucky today, she's up at like 1pm), so I don't sleep early XD