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Odd_Sarge
Literally, Reckless. Ponies give this sorrel mare purpose. Be kind. Be happy. Be a good pony. š 1948 - 2024
Odd_Sarge
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Do go on...
6881428
Gah! Thanks for pointing that out. Fixed.
Shit, you had me at privateers. I love pirates.
7921147
That's great to hear considering that the next chapter has to do with Blue's connections with privateers. Thanks for commenting!
Enjoyable so far, both the surroundings and the characters. You have my attention for the next chapters
Really great adventure! So many interesting surroundings, fresh characters and their peculiar funny affairs. Also, you managed to implement science into it, plus one point for you! I'm looking forward to the next chapters
Only one thing I'd point out. Somehow the 'I' is not capitalized, whilst it should be so everywhere. Other than that, I can't really argue.
7957846
Usually I'm on point with that sort of thing, guess I've just been letting it slip through lately.
Edit: Nope, looks like it's just on the earlier sort of chapters. Oh well, guess that's just what happens when you self edit your stuff. Fixed.
7957864 Nah, it's okay, we are all blind to our own mistakes. Actually, blame my autocorrection for it. Exchanging 'sometimes' for 'somehow'
This one starts off nicely. I wonder how the characters got to where they are.
Is the narratorās name an Arcade Fire reference by any chance?
Hell yeah, I wanna see some sea ponies!
Dragons having opium sure explains some of how greedy they can be.
I really want to see where this goes next, Odd.