Here's our ponies set in a 1940's ponyville where danger abounds, especially when it comes to a private eye named Twilight Sparkle. Follow her as she attemps to unravel a mystery that takes her all over ponyville in this noir themed short story.
Here's our ponies set in a 1940's ponyville where danger abounds, especially when it comes to a private eye named Twilight Sparkle. Follow her as she attemps to unravel a mystery that takes her all over ponyville in this noir themed short story.
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This was actually pretty funny! I loled
Several minor grammar errors, yet not enough to aggravate me. You should proof read it.