Sunset returns home only to find it not as she remembers it. The ponies of the world she finds herself in are sexy futa mares and she's the only human in the world. And the mares of this world find her scent intoxicating making her very desirable.
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So, are normal bat ponies as big as normal Earth ponies?
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Yes most bat ponies are around earth pony size
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My thoughts exactly
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Well sunset got displace into a sex free world and ponies were more pony like then the futa ponies of that world. And Sunset is aware she isn't in her right world and tried to bring it up to celestia about not being her sunset which ended with the princess breaking down.
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Maybe the sirens
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blacked
pegasi
never put a period in front of an "and"
you're talking about a group like there an individual.
remove the "a" and "cocks"
were
stepped
stepped
never put a period in front of an "and"
trained
were
never put a period in front of an "and"
never put a period in front of an "and"
never put a period in front of an "and"
asked
never put a period in front of an "and"
Moon said as she walks up to Sunset who is still being held between her moms
walked
was
snaped
nestled
was turn facing where her herd members are.
turned to face
were
never put a period in front of an "and"
Zecora's
were
was
was
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I commend your effort, but I wouldn't hold my breath. It's been 17 chapters and over 1.5 years and man-"gives no fucks"-hat hasn't taken a single piece of feedback on spelling, grammar, punctuation, etc.
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It isn't really a choice anymore I started doing this and now my ocd won't let me stop.
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Fair enough.
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Are you not getting notified when I leave corrections or?
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I did and I made some changes thanks for the help
8378924 ha my ocd has been validated suck it therapists I told you this day would come.
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We salute you and your efforts!
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So, are there not spells to make the skin and flesh either pliable or something akin to a more elastic nature?
If you don't want to go that route, no problem. Still loving this story as is.
Got through the first few paragraphs. The premise is awesome. But this really needs an editor or two. Especially when it comes to tenses.
Still disgusting.
I am reading this and while entertaining I am seeing spelling and grammar errors, maybe have some editors look over the chapters and help re-edit them. I am liking that sunset is trying her hardest to try to make reforms and change pony society for better and try not to have everyone sex with her 24/7.