Sunset returns home only to find it not as she remembers it. The ponies of the world she finds herself in are sexy futa mares and she's the only human in the world. And the mares of this world find her scent intoxicating making her very desirable.
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Even when she finds gems that are absolutely free for her to take, with no legal issues. Rarity still gets gangbang for it.
And I can only wonder if those punishments will be justified and fair. After what happened to Rarity, Pinkie, Twilight and Fluttershy, and especially Rainbow. I fear for whoever is next to be punish.
I got my eye on you, Sunset.
YAY!!! New chapter!!!
nice work.
Hah. Everyone has those stories then sunset is like “Arson”.
Herbs
Then there is things that few people think about like not being able to have a hot bath, indoor plumbing, a refrigerator
Uh.... they have literally all of this in equestria. How else do you think the ponyville day spa has hot water? They have bathrooms and fridges!!!
3 - I really have no idea if Equestia has electrical power from magic or how we get power in real life. The show was never clear about it.
They have coal for fuel because it's the only way to power the trains that run throughout equestria
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Yeah but remember when in the early episodes where ponies pulled the train
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No I don't
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Well it did happen the ponies were pulling the train instead of the engine powering the train.
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And we can still say the same about both her and Molestia here.
I know you're talking about the “refilling the teacup” prank. But what I’m trying to say that since your story still keeps everyone in character to some degree. It's not far fetched to say that the two Lestia’s still harbor Trollestia inside them, and pulling a prank on Fluttershy by bringing their dying pet, to a party where the sole purpose was to actually get to know each of Twilight’s friends personally (by talking not fucking) and introduce said pet to a animal lover, who clearly had no idea what type of bird Philomena is and why it looks sick.
And even leave Philomena alone and unguarded. Not even asking anyone to look after her, while she's gone. Not even Fluttershy.
So of course Fluttershy took Philomena without asking, That's what the Lestia’s were hoping for. They knew Fluttershy took Philomena. She's the only one who would and it's not hard to see why.
Yes it was wrong for Fluttershy to take Philomena but since this was a part of a obvious prank. Then Sunset punishing Twilight and Fluttershy was unjustified.
It was a all a prank set up by her mothers.
But you can say; did Celestia ever introduce Twilight to Philomena. I agree with what Glitchyfox said.
We were never told how long a phoenix life cycle is. So Sunset must have gotten lucky to be there during one of Philomena’s rebirths and got to spend a lot of time with her, as Twilight did not. Which is why she never met Philomena, hell Celestia never told Twilight that she haves a pet Phoenix.
So, this could go one of two ways.
Either Sunset was in on the prank and help set this all up just so she can have Twilight and Fluttershy Punished, just for the hell of it.
Which I don't believe
Or she didn't know about the prank and just like in canon Celestia easily avoids revealing her role in all this. All because nobody asked her questions.
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Especially when your own mothers didn't bother to tell you that this was all just prank they themselves set up. So, punishing Twi and Shy wasn't necessary at all. Just like in the canon.
Fluttershy: So... aren't you gonna banish me? Or throw me in a dungeon? Or banish me and then throw me in a dungeon in the place that you banish me to?
Princess Celestia: Of course not, my little pony. Where on Earth would you get such an idea?
Not to mention how harmless the situation was and yet they get severely punished for it.
Oh Sunset, this is all going to pile up on you one day......
And I’m not talking about here
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Well in the end it’s just an excuse to have a sex scene
Like in pornos where the pizza guy comes in and has sex
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Yeah, an excuse. Just like she used the whole (Rainbow Dash getting mud on her and not apologizing) as an excuse to fuck her up so badly for something so small.
I’m telling you. Ever since Sunset got her new cock she turned into a total DICK
And she needs to be stop before she ends up doing to somepony like that nobel mare did. You're already close to the grand galloping gala.
And after what she did to RD, I have no doubts she is on the path to becoming a demon. She already have a sex dungeon in her new mansion. So who knows who will be the unlucky pony she’ll go too far on. Only this time they won't recover from it.
So if she does something horrible to somepony it would be her being used as a cumdump by the castle staff in the upcoming Gala.
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And that Rainbow Dash ticks off Sunset by causing her problems that she has to fix. As Rainbow, Applejack, and Pinkie are the ones who cause the most problems that have to be fix in the series.
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Except I reread the story. Rainbow hadn't caused any problems for Sunset since the Summer Sun Celebration. Where all she did is got mud on her and called her a pet and Rainbow along Applejack were punished by the Lestias and Lunas by each one being double teamed by them using their full-size dicks on them.
As I said I have been rereading the story as research for my story and RD hadn't caused any new problems for Sunset. Hell Sunset even let Rainbow fuck her during Zecora’s orgy party.
You say Pinkie, RD, and AJ caused most of the problems but since your story is still in season one territory. There are not many episodes where they each/together caused that many problems and this is before The Young Fliers Competition. Which RD not only won but saved four lives and Sunset use word play to trick RD into becoming the princesses cumdumpster for a week, took away her dick, fuck her nonstop, and on the final day, had her moms, aunts, cousin use their full sizes on her and fuck her lower holes together at once.
Sunset purposely turned RD’s reward into the most severe punishment we had seen in this story, literally second to that evil noble who did Faust knows what to that one mare.
The Nobel was punished for the horrible things she did to that.
But Rainbow gets punished for getting mud on Sunset and not apologizing. She said so herself.
And what did Scootaloo say?
So, now you see. Sunset did all that to RD, for an incident that happened months ago. She took advantage of RD’s well earned reward just to get petty revenge for something so small. Basically putting RD’s mud crime on the same level as the nobel mare who brutally tortured a pony.
I understand that Sunset wants some payback but she went way too far and RD’s teasing her don't mean squat, since Sunset made sure to punish her each time she did.
This is supposed to be RD reward. Her prize for not only winning the young flier competition, but also saving four lives. Yet she's being severely punished because she didn't apologize for splashing mud on Sunset. Even after RD stop her teasing and behave herself, Sunset still wanted to drive it home for her and instead of at least letting Rainbow make her last day special by letting her do what she really wanted, they just Fuck her up even more.
Funny how Sunset put so much hate on The Wonderbolts because they suck at saving people, and yet RD, who wants to be a Wonderbolt does the one thing they never did, the one thing Sunset gives them so much shit for (SAVING LIVES) and she didn't even consider or even think about giving RD what she really wanted. To fuck the princesses with her own dick.
But instead Sunset just straight up denied her that for no real reason other than she wants petty revenge for that mud incident.
This is why I believe Sunset is going down a dark path and she doesn't even know it.
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Just Sunset turning the tables as before she got her cock she was fuck senseless by the ponies and even then they all still want to fuck her so she’s acting more aggressive to deal with it
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The whole setting is a hentai where sex is common and no one bats an eye to see it happening in the middle of the street and even join in. Sunset is very desireable and the ponies will pile on top of her and rape her if given a chance. So she needs to act very aggressive to keep them from doing that.
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I don't disagree with your statements, after all they are true. We seen multiple ponies try to fuck Sunset right off the bat and only one had succeeded (The Zebra Princess)
But the thing is that those were the times they first met Sunset and didn't know about her rules and how careful they need to be with her.
But Rainbow does and had already experience the consequences for her actions against Sunset (calling her a pet)
All of Ponyville knows not to overstep there bounds with her or else face the consequences, that includes her herd.
You say she needs to be more aggressive to keep others from raping her like crazy. But what's her excuse for doing what she did to Rainbow Dash. RD knows she has to be careful when fucking Sunset. Hell, Sunset is a lot tougher now that she's a hybrid.
So, a week of being fuck by one pony (a pegasus at that) is nothing to her. If she could keep going a whole week straight fucking RD who is not an Alicorn by the way. Then she could last getting fuck with obvious breaks in between. Even Rainbow needs rest.
Sunset haves absolutely no good reason that can support why she did what she did to RD. None what so ever.
She can argue about being the one always getting fuck all she wants. RD had only fuck her once, yet she gets all angry at her like she was always bending her over, when it is her herd that does that to her all the time.
She could have easily just gave RD what she asked for, to fuck all the princesses. This way she wouldn't be the only one getting pounded all the time. Just like she does to her herd.
But instead she decided to fuck RD up who hasn't done anything to deserve such treatment. She could have easily got her payback for a bit and let RD have her fun, but flat out denied her the whole week, and made her last day horrible for no reason other than to be a dick.
And I doubt she'll stop letting ponies fuck her, she sure as hell didn’t stop Raven, when she totally could have.
And that happened not long after fucking the hell out of RD.
I’m sorry but there's nothing reasonable enough to justify Sunset’s actions. Any excuse can be easily countered.
RD already knows the rules regarding Sunset.
She had face the consequences oh her actions against her and hasn't done anything wrong since.
I understand that Sunset didn't want to keep always being the bottom, but she had absolutely no right to take it all out on a pony who had only fuck her once.
Rainbow didn't mind getting fuck by Sunset, the two of them could have switch places, but instead she cast a spell to take away her dick, so she can't use it, and all because she can't handle being the bottom for a week.
Remember this is supposed to be RD’s prize for what she did at the Y.F.C. And Sunset didn't even at least make RD’s last day Special by giving her dick back and all 6 princesses would be her sex toys.
But it seems that RD great accomplishments doesn't mean jack shit to Sunset at all.
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You like Rainbow that is clear.
I really don’t care for her. As she cause most of the problems that needs to be solved.
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This has nothing to do about liking Rainbow Dash. I’m just pointing out how cruel and unfair Sunset was being to her and not having a legitimate reason for doing so.
And RD isn't the only one.
Theirs Rarity with DD’S, Pinkie Pie telling Twilight to not tell Rarity and Fluttershy the truth, and Twilight and Fluttershy with Philomena. All, unfair, unjustified punishments given after she got her dick.
I just want her to see the error of her ways before she does something she’ll regret.
It begins.... Again!
The punishment must always fit the crime
Is nobody gonna talk about that even frickin FILLIES/LOLI/FOALS gets the dick in here??? I mean, HOW OLD were the Mane Six when they got the cutiemarks, and STILL get the raping dicks from their own family, friends, bullies, their own princess, pony community, etc.!?
I mean, actually putting foal/loli in this story? WHAT THE ACTUAL F***, Madhatt886!!!???
Look I admit, I like sex/porn/horny world AU stories in this MLP fanfiction multiverse, as much as a next person in this comment section. BUT, we all ( including me ) has to have standards.
And the constant gang raping is already a strike one. The many injustices to the poor Mane Six by Sunset of all ponies ( Thanks to Mpony1's own deduction. ) is a strike two.
And you should all realized what's strike three is?
I mean, at the end of the day.
What makes Madhatt886's "Futa Ponyland of Equestria" stories. Be any different than the frickin sexist Caribou from Fall of Equestria storyline?? Or the Zebras own version of it?? No offense Madhatt866. I still kinda like your stories. But I feel that there has to be limits in some areas.
Otherwise, Sunset and her royal family WON'T be any better than the Caribou/Zebras in their own sexist and raping stories. Or even the eventual Villains/Criminals in your own futa verse also. And I can't just cheer on the "protagonists" when they do the exact same thing.
By the way Mpony1. While you keep mentioning on the Mane Six's misery, woes, and great injustice by Sunset ( Over the rather petty "crimes" and stuff ). While I do start to agree with you, and praise you for all of that.
I'm also disappointed at the same time. Because, you forgot to mention that the Mane Six were also getting gang raped in their dang childhoods! ( And this is BEFORE Sunset comes around. )
They all still get the raping dicks, and you didn't even added to your list of injustices before I posted this comment talking about it?
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They’re around apple bloom age late teens and in pony culture legal age to have sex in the setting.
I’m going with young ponies are able to live on their own and run their own businesses in cannon meaning they have shorter childhoods then humans
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Still, even going with that excuse in both the canon show, and your own futa world setting with the pony culture of "free sex", shorter childhood, etc..
It just still unnerved me for reading on the "childhood" of the Mane Six. Like a normal and morally correct person should.
Because, putting loli stuff in stories like this, would make people think of nasty child offenders. You see where I'm going with this?
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Yeah but they’re not human and are ponies, in real life a pony is sexually mature in less then two years if I remember right.
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Seriously!? You are gonna go that " being a different species and culture than humanity" excuse?
Nevertheless, it's that's true? That does explains a lot.
But, they AIN'T considered for breeding stock! Check it;
https://www.google.com/url?q=https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Yearling_(horse)&sa=U&ved=2ahUKEwj_4Pes0Zf4AhXNj4QIHe1vAzQQFnoECAkQAg&usg=AOvVaw1qwuLR3SB-dJgir3eCCta9
Still, I don't have to like it with the loli/foal and stuff And I do agree with Mpony1 that Sunset is doing to the poor Mane Six is done right petty. She probably won't be better than that raping noble that Celestia punished a while ago.
And one of these days, Sunset will do something that she will most definitely REGRET! And she will have the consequences and karma be on her ass. Being princess OR her family being royalty be damned!
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I checked and ponies can breed at 12 to 15 months of age, but it can be as early as 9 to 10 months.
As for Sunset I’m having her being the straight man pointing out the plot holes and who caused the problems in the first place.
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So don’t think of the young ponies around Appleblooms age being little kids but young adults who still need schooling
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Dang! That's a bit disturbing to know about.
I actually do understand that. I just agree with Mpony1 that the punishment themselves is too harsh/cruel in our eyes.
Alright, guess that was solved.
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Ponies are herd animals who need to be able to walk and keep up with the herd after they’re born. We humans have the longest childhoods of any animals in the real world on earth.