Just a note vegetarians often eat eggs because a chicken will produce an egg regardless if it is furtile or not. The eggs wecget at the store are essentialy chicken less, no offspring in em. Sooo there ya go.

Some minor grammar errors like 'pesgasus' instead of pegasus.
The main problem I feel with the story is a lack of flow. Some of the expositional descriptions and dialogue are rushed in and feel OoC for this universe you made. Does it mean the story is bad? No. Just means you need to work on pacing, I think. Don't force in details that will come naturally (Sunset wouldn't be curious about Celestias' size yet, at least not until she was more adjusted to this new world she is in).

I had to stop reading the moment I saw Trixie mentioned when she's nowhere near there. Please obtain a proofreading/editor.

7017057 Yep. It's only vegan's that don't eat eggs and milk.

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That was a response to the author's note. But glad I got that right.

This needs a dark tag. That first chapter deserves it

Good story is good, I did see an error in there that said something like "Ponies are not very open about sex." And then it turns around and said that they are open about sex. But I just went with it... Its a good story you just need to slow down a bit and re-read the chapter at least once to check for errors.

Other then that please keep writing I'd like to see what happens.

7018729 Think Scott Pilgrim.

And now we wait for the next chapter:0

fucking hot. Please update soon. ^^

Story is still good, needs an update

More?

There is a serious need here for spell-checking, editing, and so on, but otherwise it's not bad for clop.

"So, I'll be your sex partner," Twilight said as she slides off of Celestia's lap showing Trixie her fully harden penis to her. "It's only 9 inches and nowhere as wide."

7017174 I must agree

2 - The pesgasus are the shortest of the pony tribes as they need to keep their weight down to be able to fly.

They most likely have supple hollow bones like most birds. As well as Pegasus magic.

You need an editor bad

Ugh... Celestia just said that she don't have sex with ponies that didn't had sex before, and Twilight clearly stated that she didn't had sex before, and what they do? have sex... seriously? you just sacrificed the plot for the sex scene with Twilight and Celestia

I don't know if this gets better in later chapters, but the grammar and spelling are atrocious. You NEED an editor/proofreader. The story also sputters around with inconsistencies. Other than that, it's a good concept that I haven't seen too often (or at all) on this site.

WARNING: I AM ENTERING CRITIC MODE

I don't know if this gets better in later chapters; but the grammar and spelling are atrocious. You NEED an editor/proofreader. The story also sputters around with inconsistencies. Other than that, it's a good concept that I haven't seen too often (or at all) on this site.

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fuck off
ow my hard on

A quick clarification before my thoughts on this chapter: Hidemain is referring to what is known as the Lacto-Ovo Vegetarian, which do not eat animal products with the exceptions of dairy products and eggs. If you would still be interested in learning potential substitutions for eggs in regards to baking purposes, I believe that applesauce can be used as a suitable replacement. I do not possess the precise conversion on my person at this time, but I believe the correct ratio is 2/3 cup applesauce per egg.

Now with the culinary aside completed, allow me to share my thoughts on a matter that has caught my particular interest.

"Don't worry if you don't want it no one would force you. If someone did they be arrested," Twilight said.

"Yes forcing someone is something that I don't look kindly on," Celestia said. "But for you to interact with other ponies you're going to need to learn about sex. It's how we ponies form bonds and friendship."

Sirrah, let me take a moment to inform you that I become more verbose in my typing the more vexed I become. I find that indulging in an expanded vocabulary happens to have a cathartic effect that merely typing a series of juvenile, vaguely insulting vulgarities do not happen to produce. Thus I kindly beseech you to bear with me as I unleash a veritable deluge of Sesquipedalian Loquaciousness upon your comments thread, as to properly channel my overwhelming compulsion to perform violent actions upon hapless constructions of commonplace domicile masonry with the weaponization of grandiose lexicon. Ah, but first, an image possessing a certain memetic mutation in order to simultaneously lighten the mood and bring the topic to order.

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My good sir - whether you elect to portray my voice here as sarcastic or sincere is up to your discretion - the act of rape upon a person has come into the heated discussions of many people as of late in regards to the definition. While I will handily admit that there are some definitions that boggle my mind (such as the act of envisioning an acquaintance during masturbatory actions to be considered an act of 'telepathic rape'), I will not contest the notion that the concept of rape as a whole is reprehensible. On a cursory glance, you would appear to acquiesce to this philosophical stance.

What I am challenging, however, is at the bare minimum a mere misunderstanding of what the concept of consent entails. At the worst, I shall readily accuse you of willfully spreading false information to those who would abuse and would become the unwitting victims of abuse as a direct result.

I direct your attention to the concept of 'coercion.' Surely you have seen some variations of its employment by characters of unsavory nature in popular forms of entertainment, or have, mayhaps, encountered it in the written form. Eschewing an example - one that would likely consume several more paragraphs - the standard definition would be the practice of forcing another party to act in an involuntary manner by use of threats or force. The purpose of coercion, simply put, is to substitute one's aims to those of the victim.

Pardon me while I employ another image for situationally appropriate tension relief purposes.

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The next thing you're going to say is: Hold on, Sunset isn't being threatened or forced. Celestia clearly has her best interest at heart, and forcing people to have sex in my story's Equestria is illegal!

If you are truly convinced of that notion, then I am deeply sorry to cast such beliefs squarely into doubt. For you see, this appears to be a straightforward instance of psychological coercion. In psychological coercion, the threatened injury regards the victim's relationships with other people. The most obvious example is blackmail, where the threat consists of the dissemination of damaging information. However, this instance is not indicative of such a tactic, as there is very little material to use for the purpose of blackmailing present for Celestia to exploit. However, many other types are possible e.g. so-called "emotional blackmail", which typically involves threats of rejection from or disapproval by a peer-group, or creating feelings of guilt/obligation via a display of anger or hurt by someone whom the victim loves or respects. Another example is coercive persuasion, and the heart of my argumentation against your assertions.

In a word, such a tactic is known as brainwashing.

Perhaps you are starting to see where I am going with this discussion.

Assertions that "this sort of relationship is normal for our society," "only those forcing sex upon others are breaking the law," "sex is how one makes friends in our world," and "you need to fit into society" seem curiously tailor-made for forcing Sunset to break or be broken, wouldn't you agree?

I really don't concider eggs as "meat" as persay but it is protein and I sometimes eat eggs mostly scrambled with shredded sharp cheddar cheese ! Mmmmmm ! Oh and THIS story is so HOT that I'm In heat ! I wish Princess Celestia *a*k*a* Trollestia LOL would maybe hump me or also be my adopted mother and her sister Princess Luna could also be my sister or both of them could be my sisters Oh what fun we will have as lesbians .

Eggs being meat is up to the individual. A person who eats ABSOLUTELY NO animal products is known as a vegan. And yes, Vegans do eat baked goods. They just use substitutes for the animal products during the baking process.

Sunset did discover that while ponies are very infertile which is why their reproductive organs produce large amounts of semen to make up for that. Ponies of this world gather into herds and would all help raise any foal born from the herd. As more partners would increase the chances of a foal. Because of this sex in this world is seen as something to be ashamed of, as it's just something that everyone does. But there are laws to keep it from just being a public scene, sex is for behind close doors and forcing someone into sex.

You mean not to be ashamed of?

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Well I am trying to give a reason why a free sex world is a thing and why it would be a thing in the first place.