Sunset returns home only to find it not as she remembers it. The ponies of the world she finds herself in are sexy futa mares and she's the only human in the world. And the mares of this world find her scent intoxicating making her very desirable.
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you might really want to download Grammarly I use it for the stories I help edit if you just copy and past this into Grammarly you would only need to spend like fifteen minutes correcting it.
There's a difference between the Displaced and being displaced.
I just finished reading through this again and I have a few points to make.
1. This story has awesome potential, please don’t let it die.
2. Will there be any other changes to Sunset. It’d be nice to know if she can really fit in with everyone else.
3. I understand your reluctance to delay putting out new chapters, but find an editor for your currant chapters and when you put out a new chapter, do so unedited, hand it over to your editor then repost it. This is a good story and a bit of spit shine will only make it better. Keep up the good work.
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Tried and all of them don’t work out
More please.
Okay I had read this before, and this is my second go at it . Well I am not sure from when Sunset is from the cannon timeline . Unless, Sunset is actually from this universe after all and they were right all about her being confused from drinking the various potions messing with her mind . Still I do like how Sunset has a true family , and its sweet . The world you created is also unique , as nobody has tried something similar before . Its likely not easy to write constant futa porn , but I do want to see how can do the rest of the timeline, if heavily modified to fit your universe . I could see it , how Changelings would feed in this universe, likely having do it with ponies and absorb in the aftermath of the organism, leaving their partner open to have their love or maybe it would be lust stolen , their partners feeling tired as it was normal .