Reformed

ESupportive Dreams
Equestria Girls
Drama
Slice of Life
A group of reformed villians meet to lend each other support
Crossover
Twilight
Luna
Discord
Sunset Shimmer
Starlight Glimmer
Bureaucrabrony · 3.4k words · 834 views

This story is a sequel to Kindred Spirits

Discord, along with his new fiend, Starlight Glimmer, meet with Princess Luna as a group of reformed villians to lend each other love and support as they try to keep moving forward.

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Bureaucrabrony

Bureaucrabrony #1 · Dec 24th, 2015 · · ·

This is all new to me. Any constructive criticism is welcome. I could use any advice that might make my storytelling Better.

Falken35

Falken35 #2 · Dec 25th, 2015 · · ·

I really like this story, and you're welcome for the ideas. I definitely like the idea of having Sunset Shimmer join in next time...maybe have Twilight, the rest of the Mane Six, and Celestia there to show Sunset that she's forgiven, and have Discord do a few more of his random acts of Chaos...just anything that comes to mind. Maybe have Discord, Luna, Sunset, and Starlight discuss what they did wrong and have everypony else assure them that all those bad times are over, and that they're all friends now. I like how this is going.

Bureaucrabrony

Bureaucrabrony #3 · Dec 25th, 2015 · · ·

I hope that Discord's antics were more on point in this story. I obviously used them to break up the dialogue a bit an lighten the mood. Did anyone catch my Half-Life joke at the end?

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