• Member Since 4th Jun, 2012
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Brho Aias


Just your typical random brony who loves reading and writing. That's what I'm here for!

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Discord and Nightmare Moon have been stuck in their prisons, something equivelant to a death sentence in Equestria. Despite all the evils they've done, one pony is on their side. They are doing everything they can to bring them back, to re-introduce them to ponies everywhere.
And nothing will stand in their way.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 9 )

Meh. Needs a lot of work. Change the formatting too. Is there a reason it's all in italics?

I'm sure this story is good, but the way you format it makes somebody want to stop reading right away. Fix the paragraphs, and don't make everything italicised.

What? Italics? Come on! :raritydespair:

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Im illiterate : /

Isn't that cover image from this story?

i like it, and it's a good story.:twilightsmile:
buuuuuuuuuuut...change the format!:raritydespair:

I like the story, but it needs some work. And why is it all in italics? It kind of made me want to stop reading. :raritycry:

Everyone complained about the italics, and I can understand why. XD Reading back, it's annoying and a little straining. I'll go ahead and change it nao.

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