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I like it, but you should make them a little bit longer.
Spellcheck is your friend.
They sound the same, but "their", "there", and "they're" all have different meanings. You used one of the incorrect ones here.
Multiple exclamation points? Don't do that. Also, you're better off using the bold or italics tags (or both) rather than all caps.
OC pony with a name that includes "black", "night", "dark", or "shadow" -- DRINK!
Those last two words don't go together. The dialogue in question isn't something that would be exclaimed, either. (Hint: "exclaimed" is not a synonym for "said".)
Then there are all of the errors with punctuation, capitalization, and general grammar. This needs a great deal of work.
6846811 hey would you be interested in being my Proof reader?
6846811 I also Highly appreciate your input, and would be grateful if you could help ^^
6846635 perhaps, but its my first book, I'm not the best writer, just writing whats in my head
6847980 then you have some good ideas
6847929
Sorry -- I'm already committed to helping out another writer.
6849395 okie thank you anyway ^^ I'll look for these mistakes in the future, and highly appreciate your help
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