• Published 27th Jun 2012
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Between Blood and Shadows - Forevermore



A tale of bitter rivalry, love, loss, and betrayal.

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Comments ( 5 )

Looks good.

Minor nitpick, "Long Shot through the cake at her." rather than "Long Shot threw the cake at her."

Other than that, nothing jumped out at me, and great so far!

874928 Fixed, thanks for pointing that out :twilightsmile:

I need a new chapter please:twilightsheepish:

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