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After being trapped in the Abyss following his defeat of the Forgotten God, the Third Overlord seeks a way to return to his family and his Minions. To this end, he has constructed a massive gateway, with which he hopes to relink his old world with his new domain. Unfortunately, in the final stages of construction, a magical disturbance rocks across the dimensional boundaries and causes the portal’s aim to veer sharply to the left.

In Equestria, Princess Celestia and Princess Luna are investigating an unexplained phenomena at the castle of the Royal Pony Sisters. An ancient summoning circle, used by Nightmare Moon to summon demons and Eldritch horrors to her side during the Lunar Rebellion, has activated. And something is coming through from the other side.

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Comments ( 17 )

Wow, this is really well written. Characters are good, no blatent gramatic or spelling errors, the overlord is narrated fantastically... My only concern is the textwall factor. You may want to add a line in between paragraphs just to make it look a bit less intimidating. Other than that though, great first chapter. Can't wait to see how introductions go.

So Discord is already free and using his powers for "good" ? That should be interesting.

2004698 Yeah I read that one, didn't care for it. Not saying it was bad, just didn't like it.

The Overlord is either going to wreck some serious shit, or become their best pal.

2005156 He can't do both? I was hoping he could do both :fluttercry:

2005177
He cannot do both, so sayeth the Lord.

But minions can do it for him!

Being quite a big fan of Overlord I'm quite happy to read this. I hope to see more in the near future!

What sort of life force would a goddess give if you killed them? Ideas.....

2005104

I hope you continue this soon. I enjoyed it.

2005177
I do believe he can do both. He seems to do very well at just that, in fact.

come on overlord! conquer them all!
come on people I want to see what a enslaved/corrupted mane 6 look like!:pinkiehappy:
also I want to see if the corrupting spell works on dragons:applejackunsure: not really sure since dragons can usually resist magic.
also curious if nightmare moon will be brought back by the dark ones evil energy.

:ajsleepy::fluttercry::pinkiesad2::rainbowlaugh::raritywink::twilightsmile::moustache: can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!

Some exceptional writing here. I'll be sure to keep this story on my backburner in case there's any future updates.:moustache:
:twistnerd: And because I'm a stickler:

And of course, there were always knew ponies ready to take up their share of the burden.

I think that should be "new."

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