Something terrible returns to Equestria, that throws the nation into chaos. Can the Princesses and their forces return things to how they were, or will the Darkness consume everything?
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Something terrible returns to Equestria, that throws the nation into chaos. Can the Princesses and their forces return things to how they were, or will the Darkness consume everything?
Why are the chapters so short?
Starlight Nova - They were meant to be an intro to the story itself, something to catch everyone's attention
Good vocabulary, great imagery, good style... an ominous and promising beginning. Nice work.
That's where you stopped? A pity... it was just getting interesting.