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Two colts, Flower Blossom and Feather Wing, experience freedom in it's most basic form as they roam the land, selling weed to other ponies, making friends and running from the local law enforcement. Through their journey, they revisit their pasts and re-evaluate the meaning of life.

Warning: Weed is very involved in the central plot and important to the storyline. If you don't like reading about drugs and drug-trips don't read this. You have been warned...

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 10 )

That read like a Grindhouse production and it was awesome.

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Thank you! I was going for a 70's hippie style story with lots of timely references. This sort of mirrors one of my experiences when I was younger. I might make a LATOETTL about this

that was fucking awesome.

Nevada = Neighvada?

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Las Vegas is Las Pegasus so I guess, but I am not very fond of ponifing stuff

Thanks for the criticis though!

This is an intresting take on ponies . . .and a good idea coupled with good writing!

Wait! We can't stop here... This is parasprite country.

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Why thank you! I've decided to take this in a vaguely new direction. Before, this was supposed to be a straight-up comedy but weed and just weed is painfully one-dimensional. I decided to add some sad scenes crossed over with comedy ones to give the story a vaguely realistic feeling (PONIES IN CARS SELLING WEED HYUK HYUK HYUK). I was really afraid that the people that tracked this story will be dissapointed with the new turn and all, but hey,talking about how you're high ALL THE TIME isn't fun at all. It's like being surrounded by stoners but not being high yourself.
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I do apologize for a slightly short chapter today. I just felt like I needed to wrap Feather Wing's story up. Maybe I'll revise it later.

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