Friendship's End

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Stuff

Stuff #1 · Nov 30th, 2015 · · 5 ·

I don't find this good.

DuskShadowBrony

DuskShadowBrony #2 · Nov 30th, 2015 · 1 · ·

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Why don't you find it good? Down voting without giving a reason doesn't give the writer any chance to improve. It's just flat out complaining.

AzureDreams

AzureDreams #3 · Nov 30th, 2015 · 2 · ·

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I downvoted that comment but you only have one story vote so far. I voted up :p if you need any help editing I'm here

Stuff

Stuff #4 · Nov 30th, 2015 · · 4 ·

6682272 Because I'm not to crazy about messing up some parts of canon.

DuskShadowBrony

DuskShadowBrony #5 · Nov 30th, 2015 · 2 · ·

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It says alternate universe. Alternate timeline. There is literally a tag for stories like this. You saw the tag. You knew you would not like it. Yet you still clicked on it, just to downvote. That is equivalent to going into a restaurant that you hate, ordering food, then writing a bad review on it, just because you didn't like the food. You knew you didn't like it, but you still went forward with it. That is extremely childish.

I accept constructive criticism. What you said was not constructive criticism. You were basically telling me to write what you, and only you want. That's immature and selfish. I'll unblock you when you learn to grow up, and realize not everyone is there to serve and please you.

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DuskShadowBrony

DuskShadowBrony #7 · Nov 30th, 2015 · · ·

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Thanks, I appreciate it :3

blairmen

blairmen #8 · Dec 27th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Pretty good so far, I at least enjoyed it, you have a interesting premise and you didn't blow it your first chapter so you are already doing better then a lot of fics I have read (seriously in the last week alone I have found 6 stories where that happened, there is nothing worse then finding a story with an interesting premise and then watching some one botch it in the first 2 paragraghs.) A little sad that this doesn't have more likes. hope that you will update this soon.

DuskShadowBrony