794782 That was a mistake on my part...my mouse is weird, you see? sometimes when I mean to click 'edit' it hits 'publish' instead. As you can imagine, It pisses me off...
Zimprus Nalune: Gah, I've been waiting forever for this thing to update! And now it has! But...now I have to wait until another chapter is finished... Great work so far, Jexxazrez. I really like this fic you have going, and I hope to see much more of it. Given your fairly rapid updating skillz, it doesn't look like we'll be waiting on you too long... ...right? Pretty sure somepony else said this, but I really think your representation of Applejack is spot on. You're showcasing her pros and cons in a pretty well balanced manner, and that's made this SO much more enjoyable. Same applies for for the 2nd person elements, which have been masterfully implemented in their own right. Keep on writin'! Nalune, out.
I cant get enought of applejack!!! And second person storys are my favorite!! So this story is just amazing to me. This and scorched was good. I really enjoy reading this. And i hope its just a coincidence (i cant fucking spell and i am on my phone) that the chapters are getting shorter and shorter.
Heh, I spotted this little gem in the feature box. I could have sworn I faved this when the first chapter was posted. I'm loving the story so far and can't wait for more. And I made sure to fave it this time.
Bravo!!!!bravo!!!! ...but im mad,ya darn bucking author trolling!!!!!!!!!!!!!...sorry... I just hate trolling... but,BRAvo nice chapter and I'm already crazy for more!!!!
Its 2am, i get up at 7am for work. You magnificent bastard, this story is awesome. I totally FUUU'ed at the last chapters ending, because I would have read another chapter, IF THERE WAS ONE!. Please, this is adorable, I must has more.
Great introduction to Rarity and the rest of the Cutie Mark Crusaders.
Although I have to ask whether or not we'll see the other members of the Mane 6 make cameos appearance in this storyline or even a humanized version of .
Still, this is some storyline you got here and I can't wait to read more from it. So please do keep up the good work.
Bitch please, Navy blue is in this year, didn't you know? Damn... But anyhow, great chapter nontheless, but make the next one longer, hm? You don't want me to leave this story with blue eyes? (You see what I did there?)
794853 "Regardless of whether she does or not, the look she gave me earlier would make a tiger release it's bowels out of fear." i cnat even read that with a straight face and i tried to say it out loud
Rarity doesn't speak with an English accent. Her accent is a "Transatlantic" accent, the type of accent that was adopted by wealthy and cultured Americans starting at the turn of the twentieth century. It's basically the same pronunciation as British Received Pronunciation (i.e., "proper" English), but it deliberately eschews idioms and slang that are particular to either the US or the UK. Since a bit of the Northeastern American accent is left, it ends up sounding like the speaker lives half-way between America and Britain.
Wow, I'm loving this fanfic so far! You've almost got me pegged, except the fact that I love the outdoors, I'm fairly strong (not to toot my own horn), and I'm tan without freckles! Personality wise, we're pretty similar other that how perverted he is (or maybe I am and never realized it ) Can't wait for the next update, and hopefully it long!
P.S Would have commented much earlier, but was to tired.
great story as always. you should right more like now and post like tomorrow and all that but i know it takes time to write a chapter for a story as good as this one. so keep up the good work
810923 I update pretty fast compared to some writers...I update every 3-4 days on average. This new one might take a little longer though.... We'll say 5-6 days from now and see how well that goes!
I seem like a bitch around AJ her glares wouldn't affect me in the slitest but if Punkie shows up *shudders in fear* I don't want to. Think on that possability
794782 That was a mistake on my part...my mouse is weird, you see? sometimes when I mean to click 'edit' it hits 'publish' instead. As you can imagine, It pisses me off...
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Dear God...I could NOT stop laughing at that gif :D especially since the turn of events involves her bucking the wimpy main character...
it's 12:14. i can't feel myy feet. good story though.
Zimprus Nalune: Gah, I've been waiting forever for this thing to update! And now it has!
But...now I have to wait until another chapter is finished...
Great work so far, Jexxazrez. I really like this fic you have going, and I hope to see much more of it. Given your fairly rapid updating skillz, it doesn't look like we'll be waiting on you too long...
...right?
Pretty sure somepony else said this, but I really think your representation of Applejack is spot on. You're showcasing her pros and cons in a pretty well balanced manner, and that's made this SO much more enjoyable. Same applies for for the 2nd person elements, which have been masterfully implemented in their own right.
Keep on writin'!
Nalune, out.
yay for the new chapter!
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Biiig.. .MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAC!
you got me grounded for swearing my a** off when you left me with a cliffhanger.
you wonderful son of a-... I'm not going to say that.
P.S: i laughed my ass of at the trolling scene.
....Das it?
I waited so long...
For a long chapter...
Please start a longer chapter soon.
But still, I really like this story.
I gotta say... your chapter names are getting sort of suggestive
"the tension has been doubled"
"burrowing into her head"
"digging your way deeper"
I cant get enought of applejack!!! And second person storys are my favorite!! So this story is just amazing to me. This and scorched was good. I really enjoy reading this. And i hope its just a coincidence (i cant fucking spell and i am on my phone) that the chapters are getting shorter and shorter.
Heh, I spotted this little gem in the feature box. I could have sworn I faved this when the first chapter was posted. I'm loving the story so far and can't wait for more. And I made sure to fave it this time.
Bravo!!!!bravo!!!! ...but im mad,ya darn bucking author trolling!!!!!!!!!!!!!...sorry... I just hate trolling... but,BRAvo nice chapter and I'm already crazy for more!!!!
Its 2am, i get up at 7am for work. You magnificent bastard, this story is awesome. I totally FUUU'ed at the last chapters ending, because I would have read another chapter, IF THERE WAS ONE!. Please, this is adorable, I must has more.
Don't kill..... Cliffhanger rage building..........
sven yell all over the place
Another Buckin Tro- wait, An Actual Update
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.... another cliffhanger
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One of those mornings; I get up, strecch my neck and start my daily business....
You, ruined it by having this update.
So well done, I eagerly look up for some more
Nice chapter. im shocked how good rarity is at ready applejack. and hitting the nail on the head about not sleeping Nice work!!
PS.
Could have done with out the Rarity's real name thing, it was not good and it took away form the chapter.
Yay cliffhanger!
Awesome chapter, bro! Albeit short (), still awesome!
Loved it as always.
But of you don't make some longer chapters soon, Pinkamena will find you.
So much win. But you had to do another cliffhanger! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png Regardless, this deserves a mustache.
Great introduction to Rarity and the rest of the Cutie Mark Crusaders.
Although I have to ask whether or not we'll see the other members of the Mane 6 make cameos appearance in this storyline or even a humanized version of .
Still, this is some storyline you got here and I can't wait to read more from it. So please do keep up the good work.
M-M-MMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOAAARRRRRR!
Bitch please, Navy blue is in this year, didn't you know? Damn...
But anyhow, great chapter nontheless, but make the next one longer, hm? You don't want me to leave this story with blue eyes? (You see what I did there?)
Yeah yeah don't worry guys the next chapter will be like...5k words or so
No moar shortness now that the catalysts are out of the way.
~*INSERT CONVENIENTLY PASSING MAC TRUCK WITH IT'S HORN BLARING TO DROWN OUT ANYTHING SHE'S SAYING AS IT PASSES BY*~
Umad? :3
Of course I'm mad.
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"Regardless of whether she does or not, the look she gave me earlier would make a tiger release it's bowels out of fear."
i cnat even read that with a straight face
and i tried to say it out loud
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You are given, THE STARE ...
Be afraid.... Be very, very, afraid....
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798157hahaha fucking Pewdiepie haha
Oh of course not darling, that's a ridiculous name! She cracked a small grin.
You forgot the quotation marks at "Oh" and "name!"
Other than that, goddamn you man! A cliffhanger?!
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URGHHHHHHH..!!!!!!!! F*** YOU!
Another chapter well done. Too short for my liking though.
Navy blue hair...? Isn't Rarity's hair purple...?
Heh, next thing I know I'll be meeting Dashie.
Rarity doesn't speak with an English accent. Her accent is a "Transatlantic" accent, the type of accent that was adopted by wealthy and cultured Americans starting at the turn of the twentieth century. It's basically the same pronunciation as British Received Pronunciation (i.e., "proper" English), but it deliberately eschews idioms and slang that are particular to either the US or the UK. Since a bit of the Northeastern American accent is left, it ends up sounding like the speaker lives half-way between America and Britain.
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FINALLY somepony tells me!
THERE IS NO WAY THIS CAN GO WRONG. NO WAY AT ALL.
Wow, I'm loving this fanfic so far! You've almost got me pegged, except the fact that I love the outdoors, I'm fairly strong (not to toot my own horn), and I'm tan without freckles! Personality wise, we're pretty similar other that how perverted he is (or maybe I am and never realized it ) Can't wait for the next update, and hopefully it long!
P.S Would have commented much earlier, but was to tired.
Sees update - YES!!!
Reads it - Short... Me no like short...
Waiting - Now... We wait...
great story as always. you should right more like now and post like tomorrow and all that but i know it takes time to write a chapter for a story as good as this one. so keep up the good work
810923 I update pretty fast compared to some writers...I update every 3-4 days on average. This new one might take a little longer though....
We'll say 5-6 days from now and see how well that goes!
810986 hey no need to rush a good story but that shorter update time then most writers. it takes me a week or two before i finsh a chapter
SO DAMN MAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BUT WHAT'S RARITY'S NAME?!
This is everything I hate about HiE/humanized-Equestria stories. Why am I still reading this?
You've done something right, Jexx. I'm not sure exactly what, but you did something.
Another cliffhanger...
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Gee, I'm not sure whether to take that as an insult or a compliment...
So uh...cautious thanks?
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*Trollface*
Umad? :3 "
ARE YOU KIDDING?! I'm too busy dying from asphyxiation from laughing so damn hard to care!
I seem like a bitch around AJ her glares wouldn't affect me in the slitest but if Punkie shows up *shudders in fear* I don't want to. Think on that possability
~*INSERT CONVENIENTLY PASSING MAC TRUCK WITH IT'S HORN BLARING TO DROWN OUT ANYTHING SHE'S SAYING AS IT PASSES BY*~
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You sonavabitch...
Well played, sir, well played.
Search Osama bin laden in the search bar at top yeah there's a person named that i may have sent him some death threats