I'm likin it. You could have fixed things up and gotten them hitched in the last chapter of two and I would've been pretty satisfied. The fact that you didn't makes me think you've got something good for us what with Rarity's plan coming up soon. And bit more hilarity before they get together, hmm? Looking forward to it!
I think I like your headcannon version of Big Mac. I'm not fond of the idea of him being a simpleton. Good chapter, by the way. Short, but it does the job well. I expect more from you soon.
1108324 Understandable, though in my fic I've had a very... well, grimdark scene to say the least and I kept it to 'teen' still. But I can understand that you would want to change the rating.
I want to like this, I really do, but I just can't take 2nd person stories and I wish they'd all be printed in a way that removes them from the internet and burned along with anyone who writes them (no offence )
Welp, the feature box has put me in the right direction once again Reading through it, I really like the fic. It's funny, well written, and satisfying to my daww meter. My only issue is with the memes and references removing story immersion, but I suppose that's all part of the fic's style. Good job, now MOAR
First impression: OOOOOOOO this took a jump to 'Mature', let's find out why...
I'd complain about the length of this chapter, but since you already knew about that, there's really no point. That out of the way, the quality's great! Just what I expected.
That headcanon about Big Mac is hilarious, by the way. Mostly because, in some strange way, it makes sense...
Looking forward to more.
P.S- Just a thought, and I'm not trying to criticize you in any way, but why didn't you wait until the actual 'Mature' content chapter to switch the rating? I would think it'd give you more time to hook those who stay away from 'Mature' fics, but hey, it's your work, not mine.
1108570 I'm glad you gave it a chance at least. However, if you really have that much disdain for 2nd person fictions, you really won't like what I'm going to put out. Just saying, of course.
I noticed that you changed the rating to Mature... Hmm... Whatever you do, DON'T turn this into a clop fiction... Please... For the love of all that is sane.
1108834>>1108890>>1109428>>1109491>>1110275 For those wondering why I changed the jump to mature... There will be a sex scene coming up pretty soon. The whole 'hanging scene' was part of it as well, although that's just me being paranoid of the admins. For those who do NOT want to read it, you really don't have to. I'll but red text indicating when it starts and ends. Don't worry, I won't soil your virgin eyes with a human on human mature scene. Originally, I hadn't intended to do it, but after some encouraging from a few writers and a little bit of curiosity on how good (or bad) I might be, I decided to do it.
1109232 Oh that's just my dad's work laptop. I use windows 7 on this computer and I have a special favoritism towards Firefox not only for it's speed and add ons, but because of it's customization potential. I've made my Firefox to be blazingly fast and it trumps my Google Chrome. I love it so
nice chapter
1108151
I'm surprised your comment wasn't 'FIRST!'
Because it could have been.
I'm likin it. You could have fixed things up and gotten them hitched in the last chapter of two and I would've been pretty satisfied. The fact that you didn't makes me think you've got something good for us what with Rarity's plan coming up soon. And bit more hilarity before they get together, hmm? Looking forward to it!
1108229
I plan for a few things to happen...
I'm sure they won't disappoint :D
Sweet!!! A new chapter!
I think I like your headcannon version of Big Mac. I'm not fond of the idea of him being a simpleton. Good chapter, by the way. Short, but it does the job well. I expect more from you soon.
I like this story so much! I just wish that chapters could come faster Awaiting the next chapter!
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I'd say you're right, I'm in a writing mood all the sudden...
....Why was the rating changed to 'mature'?
Either way, great chapter! Can't wait to see how well, or disastrous, all of this plays out.
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Whelp, it looks like I'm in the box...again...
1108318
Mostly for that scene in chapter eight, but there will be a much more obvious reason for it next chapter.
1108324 Understandable, though in my fic I've had a very... well, grimdark scene to say the least and I kept it to 'teen' still. But I can understand that you would want to change the rating.
"More obvious reason next chapter", eh?
1108344 Or you know....the chapter after that...
Hush, you.
YES! A NEW CHAPTER!
This was very nice.
I can't wait for the next!
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love the chapter :D
Haha! I love you headcanon's BM!
LONGER.
DAMNIT.
LONGER.
Waiting sucks, man.
wooooooooooooooooooo GET R DONE!!!!!
4 am, tired, finish reading a good spitfirex"pov u" story. time for bed......UPDATED AoME? buck sleep!
I want to like this, I really do, but I just can't take 2nd person stories and I wish they'd all be printed in a way that removes them from the internet and burned along with anyone who writes them (no offence )
now for sleeeeee.... zzZZzZZzzz
Yesssssss! update! about time! MOAR!!
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Welp, the feature box has put me in the right direction once again
Reading through it, I really like the fic. It's funny, well written, and satisfying to my daww meter.
My only issue is with the memes and references removing story immersion, but I suppose that's all part of the fic's style. Good job, now MOAR
Was this story always rated Mature and I'm just crazy, or did Jexxazrez change it to Mature?
oh god he did change it to mature whats going to happen
great chapter as always a little short but I don't really care can't wait for the next chapter!
1108549
what spitfire fic?
effcking love this story.
just woke up, logged on to fimfiction, saw a new chapter was uploaded, screamed like a girl in exitement.
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That's alot of unread favs you got there...
Oh, and nice chapter.
1108319
And why the hell are you using XP?
That was cool like 4 years ago!
I know she's your waifu, but the quality of humanized AJ's portrail (yes, there is a difference) is phenominal.
Oh, and yours and my BM head-cannon are very similar; I also think that it was the intention of the show to do that.
Keep it up, because the hoard needs feeding.
>Wake up
>Check E-mail
>See an awesome story has updated
>???
>
1109125 at least he's not using Internet Explorer.
1109206 Touche
EDIT: or Vista
1108319 How old is your computer? ._.
It looks like a windows 2008. just saying.
A mature tag? You may now consider me scared
This is oficially my favorite one. No doubt, this is the best fic ever written.
First impression: OOOOOOOO this took a jump to 'Mature', let's find out why...
I'd complain about the length of this chapter, but since you already knew about that, there's really no point. That out of the way, the quality's great! Just what I expected.
That headcanon about Big Mac is hilarious, by the way. Mostly because, in some strange way, it makes sense...
Looking forward to more.
P.S- Just a thought, and I'm not trying to criticize you in any way, but why didn't you wait until the actual 'Mature' content chapter to switch the rating? I would think it'd give you more time to hook those who stay away from 'Mature' fics, but hey, it's your work, not mine.
1109234 I would say like a wndows XP
And to the Author i just love this story. Coincidentally it's what like i'm going through
I just wished you would update faster!
"Cornered," you say? *Cue epic Phoenix Wright music*
Glorious!
1108319 Why didn't I see this?!
*looks at time posted*
Aww, I was trying to go to sleep.
Wait. Why Mature?
1108570 I'm glad you gave it a chance at least. However, if you really have that much disdain for 2nd person fictions, you really won't like what I'm going to put out. Just saying, of course.
1108484 Go ahead, let them try to take me. I dare them.
I have my army at the ready... fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/316/9/d/spider_man_army_by_hehlfire-d32q9q5.jpg
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I noticed that you changed the rating to Mature... Hmm... Whatever you do, DON'T turn this into a clop fiction... Please... For the love of all that is sane.
1108834>>1108890>>1109428>>1109491>>1110275
For those wondering why I changed the jump to mature...
There will be a sex scene coming up pretty soon. The whole 'hanging scene' was part of it as well, although that's just me being paranoid of the admins.
For those who do NOT want to read it, you really don't have to. I'll but red text indicating when it starts and ends. Don't worry, I won't soil your virgin eyes with a human on human mature scene.
Originally, I hadn't intended to do it, but after some encouraging from a few writers and a little bit of curiosity on how good (or bad) I might be, I decided to do it.
1109232 Oh that's just my dad's work laptop. I use windows 7 on this computer and I have a special favoritism towards Firefox not only for it's speed and add ons, but because of it's customization potential. I've made my Firefox to be blazingly fast and it trumps my Google Chrome. I love it so
1108943
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/3284/Listening-to-a-Friend
Veil of Thoughts, bright eyes AND this fic updated today?
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