What the hay?!?!? I just got 10 e-mails saying you updated your story! 3 at 8:21 4 at 8:22 and another 3 at 8:23 only for me to click on it and see one more story. Why dose this only happen when you post something? I'm not mad, just disappointed and want to know how to fix.
some grammatical errors I saw, "mild annoyance, you threw the ball, not thrown, face slap for the "to be continued stunt," and that's about it. Man, I hope you update this soon. I love it!!!
I just have to say that every time I see a update for this story I geek out cause of how much I enjoy. I'm going crazy just thinking about how good the next chapter is gonna be.
Jex... again... You put the bit in about teh jogging and her plot? IS this just for me or something? You know I love the plot and ONLY read books for the plot ;)
749790 Thanks ^^ It's my first second person, but I find I have a knack for it I guess... My other story is terrible. It's quirky and funny, but the character is overpowered and was only popular on fanfiction.net anyway. Glad you gave it a chance :D
749858 I painstakingly work every day to ensure each chapter has exceptional quality and the most EXQUISITE of lolz. New chapter garunteed sunday at the latest.
I don't normally add comments (this is my first, actually) but I just wanted to let you know your story was/is my gateway drug into fimfiction. So thank you. It's rare to see a 2nd person narrative but you've managed to pull it off spectacularly.
First. Also, great. More. I think AJ is a Tsundere in this fiction, or am I wrong?
Something tells me you're gonna ask Big Macintosh about AJ.
...More?
What the hay?!?!? I just got 10 e-mails saying you updated your story! 3 at 8:21 4 at 8:22 and another 3 at 8:23 only for me to click on it and see one more story. Why dose this only happen when you post something? I'm not mad, just disappointed and want to know how to fix.
Yeah... Apologies... Will it turn to a clop? I hope not...
Either way, I don't care...
so much awesome
some grammatical errors I saw, "mild annoyance, you threw the ball, not thrown, face slap for the "to be continued stunt," and that's about it. Man, I hope you update this soon. I love it!!!
744949
No clop
745181 Okay dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Applejack_lolface.png
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There will be clop in my other future fics :3 I have big plans
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When is next chapter??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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I'd say in another 5 days...
I just have to say that every time I see a update for this story I geek out cause of how much I enjoy.
I'm going crazy just thinking about how good the next chapter is gonna be.
744949
It's humanized, so clop would be acceptable. It's not needed though.
That description of his dream girl really reminds me of Twilight (Sparkle).
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It sort of does...Sadly Twilight isn't here
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None of the mane six are, I take it?
744941 I think that's when I edit then have to re-publish xD
This story is oficialy now my favorite! xD
SQUEE! I'm dying inside from all this D'aww! Random trivial fact, though. Only one East acre?
To be continued... RIGHT NOW !
What went through my head trololololol trollololol hahaha!
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Is somebody upset?
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My mistake >.> I meant to say 'acres'
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Your favorite? Even better than My Little Dashie???
Great job showing AJ thoughts on our narrator within this chapter as I found it much interesting to see her insight on the whole situation so far.
Nice to see that good old Applejack strength being used in this chapter as well.
Please do keep up the good work.
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Well, My Little Dashie was the only story that made manly tears show themselves;
Your's on other side, made me giggle from the humor and situational jokes : D
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It's glad to know that at least people are laughing ^^
I'm still relatively new to writing, and this is my best work to date.
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Will do!
Jex... again... You put the bit in about teh jogging and her plot? IS this just for me or something? You know I love the plot and ONLY read books for the plot ;)
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That's for me to know and for you to crap out later....
Speaking of plot... I've been drawing Anthro-clop lately...
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hmmmm... and links? you know... for completely research purposes
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As soon as a computer is open. (I'm typing this from my ps3 because I'm ghetto like that.)
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Ahh the PS3 a beautiful piece of Tech... add the name of this account and you will get a better player *wink wink*
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FFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
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Here are you links, captain.
http://sphotos.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ash3/533975_434374596583009_2100427888_n.jpg
http://sphotos.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ash3/600146_434375486582920_1153735734_n.jpg
Enjoy ^^
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Besides Applejack... Nope
at first I was reluctant to read this since I normally don't like HiE or humanized fics, but I gotta say, this one's pretty damn good
my reaction to the awesomeness of this fic:
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Thanks ^^
It's my first second person, but I find I have a knack for it I guess...
My other story is terrible. It's quirky and funny, but the character is overpowered and was only popular on fanfiction.net anyway.
Glad you gave it a chance :D
This story doesn't need clop. It's good just the way it is! But nice chapter, though. I'm looking forward to some romance!
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by the way, a new chapter hasn't been uploaded yet.. and..
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I painstakingly work every day to ensure each chapter has exceptional quality and the most EXQUISITE of lolz. New chapter garunteed sunday at the latest.
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What part caused said enjoyment?
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take your time, I rather wait for a good chapter then to read something that was rushed
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That's the mistake I made with 'change in heart'
OK now I love this story! its fantastic, its so well write, and the flow this great. please keep it up!!
PS. Love Big Mac's 'look" attack
Big Mac stare sounds like Fluttershy's stare
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Fluttershy's stare is one that scares the foe into submission. Big Mac's stare is more like....'I ain't givin' up.'
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"I ain't givin' up"? Personally, i thought of his stares more of a "say it, and accept it". :o
@ Fluttershy stare... http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/51/flutterstare.png/
I don't normally add comments (this is my first, actually) but I just wanted to let you know your story was/is my gateway drug into fimfiction.
So thank you. It's rare to see a 2nd person narrative but you've managed to pull it off spectacularly.