• Published 20th Nov 2015
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The Reasons and Ways of Pinkie Pie - Fire Zap



We all know the story of how Pinkie Pie got her cutie mark, but how did she come to live with the Cakes?

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Pinkie waved to her family as the train departed. She was nervous, yet excited. She was... Nervxcited! Yeah! That was it!

"BYYYYE!"

Comments ( 2 )

I've only read the first chapter, this doesn't seem like a second person story. Are you sure it needs the tag? But to be fair, I don't know the difference between narrative perspectives...

You have a great start on your story! I look forward to reading the rest of it! :twilightsmile:

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