• Member Since 25th Sep, 2015
  • offline last seen Oct 25th, 2017

Fire Zap


I WANT YOU! For the Bottles of Awesome Sauce Army. Don't think I'm a lesser intellect just because I'm a girl. I can kick ass better than you. Now, DROP AND GIVE ME TWENTY!!!

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Pinkie Pie got her cutie mark on a dreary rock farm, and decided to move somewhere where she could use her special talent anytime she wanted. To make this dream possible, she moves in a nearby town that goes by the name of Ponyville, where she finds laughter, fun, treats, and a loving family.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 3 )

Your story needs some work...

I've only read the first chapter, this doesn't seem like a second person story. Are you sure it needs the tag? But to be fair, I don't know the difference between narrative perspectives...

You have a great start on your story! I look forward to reading the rest of it! :twilightsmile:

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