I have many titles and names, Lord, God of Terra, Monster, destroyer, killer, savior, demon, Lone, Saber, Naalein but there's only four I'm proud of being called, Dad, Uncle, Brother and Loving husband. This is the tale of my life as a troubled God
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Moar plz
Two forms of his dragon..... only one word came to mind.... GAAAAAAAYYYYYYY... lol no really they look ba
So far so good
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Damn. I wasn't expecting the love.
6585898 iz lovez the shitz out of you and the story and favz forz dayz toz
6585899 okay just don't stab me.
6585902 ok ill keep my knives,swords,explodingknives,battle axe,randomn i stabs you attack,alligartor sword,exploding alligator sword,exploding knives with lasers,and some other sharp randomn stuff at bay.
6585902 guess who got featured
6585918 uh, Morgan Freeman?
Damn. Dragon God all the way.
6585938 no all my wepons aka illeagel wepons
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6585961 good thing I'm from M.I.B...fuck I said to much!
*deneurilizer flash*
You saw nothing.
6585961 good thing I'm from M.I.B...fuck I said to much!
*deneurilizer flash*
You saw nothing.
This is a good start but the whole thing feels ruched. Flech it out.
6585990 meh. I do what I want.
Am I the only person left who prefers James Earl Jones over Morgan Freeman.
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6585975 hey i work with you guys wtf!!
I'd have put god-form more like this:
le.gros.chat.roux.free.fr/img/FF10/FF10-Bahamut.png
6585968 lol thats what im like with me wepons
Everybody has their own opinion, but that's probably the only thing I hate about your character right now. I'll keep reading, but I'm gonna keep looking out for misanthrophy from this character.
6585975 We saw everything
I like it. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up!
I orgasmed just by looking at thise dragon form. loving this already.
for some reason the picture of his cutie mark and his battle form are not showing up
6601242 everything seems fine.
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Shit, I checked out at the Morgan Freeman joke and started chuckling.
This story reminds me of the futility of human endeavor.
Does the pacing get better as the story goes on, or worse? Eh, f@#$ it, I'll read it anyway.
Some typos but nothing too major. Half of the pictures don't work but honestly I wouldn't even mind that much. What is a real turn of is heavy referencing to real life religions. But then again that is just my being anti-theistic for various reasons, I'll not speak more of those here since I doubt my own ability to speak of these things without going on a serious rant and insulting someone.
What a weird start. I mean, I've seen some strange starts, but I think this takes the cake.
Nice pictures by the way.
As long that there is a good person humanity is saved
dat god mode tho
I love how in the intro the russian(I think) says,
in English, and with a slit throat.
Edit; I feel mildly ashamed for posting before reading the next sentence.
I feel like I'm watching a play through of COD and probably battlefield with the whole Russian thing...seriously....They have no one else?
On a second thought...is it?
Morgan freeman is God confirmed! Also, that God mode looks beast.
6601242 I can see those just fine. But I can not see the default mode.
Morgan freeman is God? No wonder he always play the role of God in Movies
This first chapter isnt really pulling me in. Its either because of the way it is written or the grammar that is kinda turning me off. Maybe in the other chapters you have gotten better with the writting, but I think i'll just keep this story on the back burner for now and try reading at a later date.
6860286 also, the godmode/op mode has big legs
i love how he knew god for like 30 seconds and he is already to the stage where he is calling THE CREATOR OF EVERYTHING EVER, simply G...
why is this canceled?
Decent story, a little bit inane, but inanity (stupidity) makes for good stories. One unfortunate part of this is that the punctuation and grammar aren't that good, but aside from that, it's a decent story.
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The punctuation and Grammar is what caused me to rewrite it completely.
Uncle death, can you please continue with this story? Also, the first picture in this chapter is not showing.