I have many titles and names, Lord, God of Terra, Monster, destroyer, killer, savior, demon, Lone, Saber, Naalein but there's only four I'm proud of being called, Dad, Uncle, Brother and Loving husband. This is the tale of my life as a troubled God
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You're great at describing how a fight happens and what goes on during one. You could probably make a really awesome fight scene of you're own design with no problem. I know it's easier to use attacks used by other franchises, but it's even better to use your own ideas simply because it's easier to fit it into the style you've developed for the story. Here's an example: Mortal Combat is about combat between mortals. (Shocking right? ) But Saber is a god, so those moves don't really fit him that well, at least in my opinion. I think you should go in the direction of the overwhelming juggernaut, since you've let him get hit by bullets already, and he obviously can survive a crap ton of hits. Also, don't be afraid to make him a Gary Stu, at least in terms of fighting, because he actually has a reason to be a Gary Stu. He's a god, it's kind of expected.
Take these suggestions any way you feel like. I'm not trying to tell you what to do or anything, just trying to be helpful.
6656885 it's Lone now, until he gets his momery back. And also, Scorpion is not a mortal from my understanding, I think. And thanks for the tip.
6585898 That happens when you write a good dragon story.
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At least when it's an adventure/action story. fucking clop fics.
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Meh, tomato tomato............ sh#t, it doesn't work if it's text.
Also, I don't play mortal combat, so I didn't know that.
Meh... I would have gone ahead with killing the leader. Some people just need to die
Mortal combat too, I was wondering when it going to show up, also I burst out laughing with the "GET OVER HERE!" Part xD
6657130 Some people want watch the world burn.
6657661 Because I could
6657656 Meh, it was the only thing I could come up with
6656957 I found this while searching for Diablo related shit, when this came up.
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6659321
Nice
6661067 That's just how I write but meh, I'm actually trying to cut back on the swearing by a shit ton and It's taking some time for me to do so. Plus, this fic was originally for shits and giggles in the first place, that is until people actually started liking it.
6661081 but aren't we all?
6661446 The person has to be influential though but then again, shit could happen and make the dude or woman very influential
6662274 yes but only the order, they despise magic because they think it doesn't allow them to evolve their technology. So since they hate magic and dont use spells, they came up with more efficient weaponry. Only the bad guys get them basically
6662348 problem?
finally its good to meet another dragon in the void its hard as fuck to find a smart dragon in void like i just said
6664532 enjoying the story so far?
I see a balrog, now we need a wizard.