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Revin


Im a Normal guy who spends most his day with video games and thinks about pones more than a healthy person should but im any thing but normal

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A changeling egg was abandon in a bushes on the out skirts of the everfree forest. left to fend for it self as a egg. In tell a butter colored mare fond it and could bring her self to leave a helps egg all by it self even if it a changeling. and decides to raise right not a love stealing monster. This is a story about the changeling,s life.

Thanks to my friend Cptheadcrab for being my editor.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 11 )

Great story so far besides a few spelling errors and using said to much you did pretty good also a baby changeling is called a nymph and they make chittering sounds when their young

6757664 you prove a food pint thanks for pointing that out I will fix it soon. And for the spelling and grammar I'm just shit at that so I'm using a friend for that but thank you for the feed back.

No prob man just helping out

6757889 How dare you blame me

just one word. AWWWWWW :heart:

Awsome story hope for some more

6762582 Thank you very much for the feed back

This story has potential. And it's good so far. Hope to see it bloom into the story of the ages.
:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

6777771 Lets hop im still new to writing story's. But thanks for the encouragement.

6778550 Ya, so am I. The whole writing thing is more difficult then it should be.

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