Huh, interesting.

Responce is...Mixed XD

ok start
question any minecraft mods?

I'll withhold judgment until you get to chapter 5. However you would do well to slow down your pacing a bit. And characters are a touch oc but it's not too bad. Again I'll withhold full judgment until the 5th chapter

6500883 By 5, I hope to get across the main ponit of the story XD And itll smooth out next chaptater, Promise!~

6500727 Some, not many, mostly just to add weapons and maybe cosmetics one alone with Demiosnal doors WILL be a thing, that I know for sure.

i like it so far i need more

6501419 Yayyy, someone liked it >.>

I can tell this is going to be an interesting story.

6502559 Yayyyyy

6500213

Responce is...Mixed

So is your skill with English. Even the Brits spell it "response", although "responce" did come up as a match in French. And then there's your description...

apperntly
legendry

Spellcheck is your friend. Use it.

thats pretty much it

Learn how to use an apostrophe.

6503096 I have a spelling disorder, I write for fun, not to be professional, thats boriinnggg

L4D. Boomer

6508833 I tried coming up with different nammmessss.

6511303
I smell a pun

6511756 *sniffs* Huh.

6511787 I SMELL BABYS! I LOVE BABYS I LOVE THEM TO DEATH CUZ THEY ARE SO DELICIIUS!

6516342 (sorry for being crazy but im insane from radioation it meses with my brain)

... I kind of want to see how this goes. Is Rob a ditz, or just slightly less random than Pinkie, or is he worse because he knows the source material... Only time will tell!

Rather amusing. I like it.