"Come on, come on, you gotta see this!" Pinkie piped as she bounced down the hall.
"Pinkie, why are you leading me to the fancy bathroom?" Rainbow groaned as they reached a pair of blue double doors.
"Shush!" Pinkie whispered as she pressed her ear against the doors. "Keep quiet and look!"
She pushed them open a crack and Rainbow rolled her eyes as she went along with Pinkie's craziness and peeked in with her.
Rarity had asked Discord to make a larger, more elaborate bathroom once the castle started getting crowded. The room contained a shining, circular pool bordered with glimmering white tiles. Two tiny waterfalls trickled into the pool, keeping it fresh and clean. But the peaceful bathing area wasn't what made Rainbow's jaw drop.
In the center of the pool stood Twilight. Not quite in the pool, but on the water's surface. Her eyes were closed and her horn was illuminated as three small orbs of water circled her. Her brow was furrowed, as if she were in a state of deep concentration.
"What is she doing?" Rainbow whispered.
"I don't know," Pinkie replied. "I just came in here to play pirate, but she was in here, acting like those monks in the east you're always talking about."
"Hey! For your information, eastern monks do not levitate themselves like that while meditating!" She paused. "Okay, so maybe some of the unicorns do that for fun, but they don't stand on water or anything creepy like that!"
"Well, I'm gonna ask her. It's hard to play pirate when there's a vampire meditating in the middle of the pool." Pinkie burst open the doors. "Hey, Twilight!"
"Gah!" Twilight gasped, opening her eyes.
Her concentration broke and the spheres became one with the pool as Twilight fell in after them. Pinkie and Rainbow stepped to the edge and looked down curiously at the wet unicorn.
"What was that all about?" Rainbow inquired.
"Yeah, you were standing on water!" Pinkie exclaimed. "That's not natural! Even for a unicorn!"
Twilight sighed as she crawled out of the pool. "I was practicing zebra magic."
"Zebra magic?" Rainbow and Pinkie questioned.
"Yes. While you and Discord were away, Rainbow, I decided to pay Zecora a visit. See, now that I'm a vampire, I can take revenge on the Sirens who killed my family, but I don't know who they are or what they look like. It was very dark when I last saw them. So I thought Zecora could tell me. She came up with a blank, but she said if I call upon my own memories, I can find their location myself. So she's been teaching me a few techniques."
"I didn't know zebras could…hover like that," Rainbow said.
"Yeah, doesn't Zecora usually look in that glowing crystal ball of hers?" Pinkie asked.
Twilight giggled. "Apparently, that's just for show. The real magic comes from in here," she said, pointing to her chest, "and here," then to her temple. "In fact, some of the magic she uses isn't what we consider witchcraft, but tricks she learned from a shaman in her village before she came to Tramplevania."
"So…what exactly were you doing just now?" asked Rainbow.
"I was trying to find the Sirens by concentrating on my memories of them."
"And did you find anything?"
She sighed. "Nope. But…I did see the image of a unicorn. It wasn't very clear but it was like looking at a pony-shaped flame."
"Do you think it's one of the Sirens?" Pinkie inquired.
"I don't think so. As far as I could tell, none of them were unicorns and I'm pretty sure I saw a horn on this mare, but if I was concentrating on the Sirens, she must be connected with them somehow."
"If you ever do find those Sirens," Rainbow smiled, pounding her front hooves together, "I'll pound 'em with ya!"
"Me too!" Pinkie piped, standing proudly on her hind legs. "An enemy of my friends' is an enemy of mine!"
Twilight grinned. "Thanks, you guys."
Pinkie narrowed her eyes at her. "Now walk the plank, ya scurvy dog!"
She strapped a black patch over the unicorn's eye, confusing her. "Huh?"
"Just go with it," Rainbow murmured as Pinkie tied a red bandana on her head.
Fluttershy wasn't sure how much more she could take of Count Trenderhoof. All afternoon, he did nothing but drone on and on about himself. Apparently he had traveled a lot and that discussion would've been more interesting had Lady Starlight not cut her niece off every time she had a question.
His sister wasn't much better. Lady Sunset hardly said a word, but when she did she was extremely unpleasant. At breakfast she had regurgitated her food onto Starlight's good carpet and scolded the cook for serving her improperly cooked eggs! Trenderhoof had excused himself a minute later, looking quite green. They must have been allergic or something, because Fluttershy didn't find anything wrong with the eggs. Then as Sunset was passing Double Diamond and Party Favor in the hall, she had snapped at them, demanding that they not stare at her. And now as they were having tea, Night Glider had accidentally dropped the tray onto Sunset's lap and the noblemare was throwing a fit.
"You clumsy oaf! You've gotten tea all over my new dress!"
"I-I'm sorry, domnişoară, I-I'll bring you another…" Night Glider stammered.
"Don't even bother! Get out of here!"
The maid shrieked as Sunset used her magic to throw a cup at her. She didn't hesitate to dash out of the room.
"I deeply apologize for my servants' behavior!" Starlight insisted. "Good help is so hard to find these days!"
"Look at this!" Sunset exclaimed, gesturing to the large brown stain on her yellow skirt. "This is disgraceful! Now I will have to go change! Aria! I'll need you to wash this!"
Aria, who had been standing in attendance with the other maids, rolled her eyes and gruffly followed her mistress out.
"Oh dear," Starlight said, turning to Trenderhoof. "I hope my servants haven't caused too much distress."
"She'll be fine," he assured her. "My sister can be a bit…dramatic."
"And I am so sorry the past two meals weren't satisfactory for your taste. Perhaps you could suggest the main course for dinner?"
Fluttershy cringed at the thought of having another meal with their two awful guests. She couldn't bear to sit through another one of Trenderhoof's anecdotes or Sunset's temper tantrums. Her meals with Discord had always been much more pleasant.
Then she had an idea.
"Um…Auntie?"
"What?" Starlight said abruptly, as if just remembering she was there.
Fluttershy bit her lip. "I, um…forgot to tell you that…Count Discord's back in town and…he invited me to dinner tonight."
"Count Discord?" Trenderhoof asked.
"A friend of ours," Starlight explained. "A rich but reclusive noblestallion who owns a castle in the wood."
"A castle!" he exclaimed, rubbing his chin. "You don't say. Perhaps he wouldn't mind if my sister and I joined you?"
"Oh, uh," Fluttershy stammered, "actually, he…only wanted…me to come."
Even with Discord's hypnotic powers, she needed some time away from all of them.
"When did you even receive this invitation?" Starlight demanded.
"Uh…this morning?"
"I don't remember any pony coming to our door."
"It was in a letter! Addressed to me! So, naturally, I…was the only one who read it."
Starlight sighed. "Well, this is on short notice, but…"
"I told you, Auntie, he just wants me to join him."
"Don't tell me you're going there alone?! Not again!"
"Again?" Trenderhoof questioned, cocking his head.
"I could have Double Diamond or Party Favor escort me!" Fluttershy suggested.
At least those two weren't unpleasant company.
Starlight still looked disapproving, but she sighed in surrender. "Alright, Double Diamond can take you, but Night Glider will accompany you too!"
Fluttershy could tell she didn't want her alone in the forest with two stallions. She didn't want to cause a scandal.
"I hope you don't mind my niece not joining us this evening, Count Trenderhoof," Starlight said apologetically.
"That's quite alright," Trenderhoof smiled, though there was a hint of apprehension in his voice. "I was going to meet my business partner tonight anyway. I could dine at his place, but my sister can keep you company, doamnă."
Starlight put on a grin that looked just as forced as his. "Oh, splendid! I just…adore your sister!"
Trenderhoof set down his cup, which was still full. "Would you excuse me for a moment? I'm just going to inform my sister about this."
He kept up his smile until he was down the hall. His eyes darkened as he trotted up the stairs and to Sunset's room. He opened the door and Sunset shrieked in horror as she pressed a purple dress against her chest in an attempt to cover up as much of her undergarments as possible.
"Ever heard of knocking?!"
"Oh please," Trenderhoof chuckled as she shut the door. "As if there's any part of you I haven't seen."
Nevertheless, Sunset ducked behind a dressing screen while Aria smiled to herself.
"Anyway, darling," he said, walking to the window, "we have a slight problem."
"What's the matter?" Sunset snickered. "Can't keep your latest catch ensnared?"
Trenderhoof gritted his teeth together in annoyance. "Apparently, the Lady Fluttershy is having dinner with a Count Discord this evening…alone."
"Count Discord?" Aria said. "I've heard of him. The servants here won't stop gossiping about him. Apparently, Lady Fluttershy's gone to his castle for dinner five times." She lowered her voice. "The first time without an escort."
"Ooh," Sunset taunted as she emerged from behind the screen. "Looks like you've got competition…brother!"
"Shut up!" Trenderhoof shouted before turning back to Aria. "What else did you hear?"
Aria shrugged. "The stallion's rarely seen, that's why he's such a big deal here, but those two idiot male servants said he was quite the looker."
He winced. "And…exactly where does he stand with…Lady Fluttershy?"
She gestured for him to come closer and whispered, "I heard the skittish maid say that the Count had asked Lady Fluttershy to marry him."
"What?!"
"But she said no, yet she still sees him."
Trenderhoof growled in fury. There was no mistaking that blush in her cheeks when she had mentioned Count Discord. This was more than just a mere friendship.
Sunset Shimmer was laughing her head off.
"Oh, this is just too wonderful! The almighty Don Juan's latest conquest is seeing another stallion! Another count, for that matter! How rich is he, Aria? Do you know?"
"Well," Aria said, "that pegasus maid said that some ponies say he can make gold appear out of thin air."
This made the noblemare laugh even harder. "And he's loaded! Oh, suppose word gets out that you're flat out broke! She'll have to marry this Count Discord then!"
"Silence!" Trenderhoof commanded.
Even though she didn't will it, her mouth closed shut. Trenderhoof took a deep, calming breath.
"This is only a minor setback. They're not engaged yet. However, it seems I will have to romance Lady Fluttershy, after all."
Sunset scowled. "What?!"
"She's in love with this count! Even if her aunt disapproves of the match, young lovers are very stubborn. You of all mares should know that."
Sunset folded her hooves. "What about this Count Discord? Even if you do manage to win the pathetic little pegasus' heart, he might get in the way."
"Simple. We just distract him with a…prettier face."
He cupped Sunset's chin. She backed away.
"Oh no! No, no, no, no! I am not seducing another stallion for you again!"
"Why not? I seduced all those mares for you."
She huffed. "Yeah, right, for me."
"Look, you don't have to lay with him or anything, just…entertain him enough for him to divert his attention from the Lady Fluttershy. And hey, you can drink him when you're done."
"That's not going to be easy," said Aria. "According to the servants, Count Discord's supposed to be a recluse. He never leaves his castle or invites any pony up there. Lady Fluttershy was an exception, it would seem."
"My, my, my," Sunset smirked as she admired her hooficure. "She must be pretty special to him then."
"This changes nothing!" Trenderhoof barked. "We will get Lady Fluttershy's inheritance!" He smiled and placed his hooves on Sunset's shoulders. "Perhaps we could get Count Discord's too…"
"Don't even think about it!" Sunset hissed, flashing her fangs at him.
"Alright, alright!" He grinned at Aria. "I suppose one of the Dazzlings would be up for the task…"
"What?! Are you saying I can't handle it?!"
Trenderhoof shrugged. "Well, if you can't do it, the Dazzlings might actually be more successful…"
"I'll do it, alright?! I'll do it!"
"But how are you even going to get near the Count Discord?" Aria asked. "He never sees any pony, remember?"
"Except for the Lady Fluttershy," Trenderhoof sneered. "I'm sure he wouldn't refuse an invitation from her. All she has to do is invite him to have dinner here with us."
"And how are we supposed to do that?" Sunset demanded. "Just walk right up to her and ask her to invite him?"
"Sunset, Sunset, Sunset. You forget my powers of persuasion."
"Then why don't you use them more often? Have her fall in love with you and have it done and over with?"
Trenderhoof winced and ground his teeth together. "I told you that would spoil the fun!"
"Aw, poor baby!" Sunset said with a mocking pout. "Or are your 'powers of persuasion' just not what they used to be?"
He darted his red eyes at her. "One more snarky comment out of you and I'll have the Dazzlings rip you apart!"
A grin sprouted on Aria's face, which on her looked horrifying. "Ooh, I like that idea!"
Sunset's jaw dropped in appalment. Then she huffed and stormed out of the room towards the nearest lavatory. Using her magic, she simultaneously slammed the door and switched on the faucet. She scooped up the running water in her hooves and splashed it on her face. Then she took deep breaths, anything to calm herself down.
She looked up into the mirror and saw nothing but the wall behind her. It had been ten years since she had seen herself. Was she even still beautiful? How pathetic did she look now as her face dripped with water?
One thing she knew for sure: her eyes were turning red. She could feel the fire rising to her face as she gazed at the empty glass before her.
She cried out in fury and her horn exploded with green, shattering the mirror into pieces.
Coco Pommel came rushing in. She gasped when she saw the bits of glass scattered across the floor.
"Domnişoară, what happened?"
Sunset bit her lip anxiously as she glanced between the maid and the mess. Thinking quickly, she scowled at the former.
"Look what you've done, you ninny!" she bellowed. "Clean this up at once!"
Coco blinked. "But I didn't…"
"Now! Or I'll tell your mistress you broke the mirror!"
The maid gulped and set to work. Sunset snorted at her but as she left the lavatory, she sniffed and wiped away a trickle of blood from her cheek.
Fluttershy insisted on getting herself ready for her dinner with Discord. She was still thinking about how shocked her aunt had been when she had shut her bedroom door on her. Fluttershy was in such excitement, running to and fro between her closet and vanity. She wanted to look her best for Discord, having not seen him in so long. She had felt embarrassed about being in her nightdress when he returned to her. Her hair must have been a mess!
She finally decided on a simple blue gown that brought out her eyes and put on the butterfly necklace he had given her. As she started on her hair, she began to realize how silly she was being.
"Oh, look at me, Angel!" she laughed, glancing at her bunny in the mirror. "Here I am, worrying about how I look, all over some male!"
She blushed at the very idea. "I suppose I should've told him in advance I was coming, but won't he be delighted when I surprise him?"
Angel crossed his arms.
"He won't hurt me, Angel. I'll be fine on my own. Do you think I should tie my mane up or leave it down? I'd look more mature if I put it up, but he so likes it when I let it loose. Oh, but I don't want him to think I'm being too forward…"
Angel rolled his eyes and hopped under the bed, grunting, I don't know you anymore, mare!
By the time she was done, it was nearly seven o'clock, which meant it had taken her almost two hours to prepare!
"Goodness, I'm becoming my aunt!" she exclaimed as she raced downstairs.
Starlight and Night Glider were waiting, the maid dressed in her evening gown and shawl. Trenderhoof and Sunset were there too, for no reason presumably other than to see her off.
"Oh, you look beautiful, domnişoară!" Night Glider exclaimed.
"Indeed," Trenderhoof observed.
He ignored the pressure Sunset was exerting on his hoof.
"You certain this is wise?" Starlight asked skeptically.
"I will be fine, Auntie," Fluttershy assured her. "Double Diamond and Night Glider will make sure of that."
"She's in good hooves, doamnă," Night Glider said as she hooked her foreleg with Fluttershy's. "Now come on! Diamond's waiting outside."
"Just a moment!" Trenderhoof called before they could make it out the door. "I'd like a word with Lady Fluttershy, if you please."
Fluttershy nodded to the maid, allowing her to go on without her. "Yes, domnule?"
He smiled kindly. "Are you sure my sister and I can't join you this evening? We wouldn't be a bother."
"Oh, I'm sorry, but…Count Discord doesn't like strangers and…"
"But I'm no stranger," he said, cupping her chin so she would look directly into his eyes. "He can trust me." His eyes slowly changed into spirals. "You can trust me."
Fluttershy blinked as the count appeared to be staring blankly at her. It was making her feel awkward.
"Sorry, domnule," she said, stepping away, "but I must respect the Count's wishes."
Trenderhoof was abashed beyond comprehension as the mare went out to join her servants. Sunset was in a fit of hysterical laughter.
"Oh, brilliantly done, brother! Getting her to fall for you will be easy!"
"Shut up!" Trenderhoof commanded. "I don't understand. She should've fallen immediately under my power…"
His partner smirked. "Maybe you've lost your touch, dear."
He scowled at her. "Fine! We'll learn about Count Discord some other way. Follow her. See where he lives, and how close he is with Lady Fluttershy."
She crossed her forelegs. "What do you take me for? Some lackey?! Have one of your concubines or your guard dog spy on her!"
Trenderhoof wasn't in the mood to argue, so he growled firmly, "Go. Now!"
Sunset flinched as she felt a sudden pain in her head. "Ugh! Alright, alright!"
She glanced down the streets to see if any pony was around. Once it was safe, she sprouted her wings and took to the skies.
"Honestly! The things I do for this stallion!"
Like the story! But...if it's not too much trouble, could you maybe put Discord under a spell (since Fluttershy is apparently immune)? It would be heart-wrenching to see Fluttershy try to get her true love back, something like that.
Ooohhhh so excited for next chapter! GG DisneyFanatic!
6924192 if u dont like the story, then y r u reading it? please take such negativity elsewhere...
6924248 So sorry. I don't take seriously anyone who replies to a critique with l33t speech.
6924255 actually, its text talk, not leet or whatever, but thats beside the point. the point is, u dont seem to like how Discord is being portrayed as the classic Dracula, even though that is appropriate to the setting of the story, and then loudly proclaim ur dislike. that is not a critique, that is merely petty and trollish. the story and characters work within the confines of the setting, if u do not like it, or disagree with the authors choices...fine...allow those who do like the story to enjoy in peace
Ha!
6924214 wow! You really like drama and romance stories!
Me too!!!
I just don't understand Sunset! Why is she doing this!?!?!?
6924508 it was explained in an earlier chapter regarding vampiric marriage. If a vampire forces one to go through the ceremony, their new spouse is subservient to them and must obey their commands. If the spouse is willing, they are equals.
And now we play the waiting game.
I sense a disaster in the works... Fifty Bits on Discord
Well this will end well, hope everyone else gets caught up with events soon, driving me nuts already knowing when the charcters don't >.<
Now i just need to see sunset and twilight meet...
Please!!!!
Theyre just so perfect for each other!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice chapter. But I have to be honest; Trenderhoof is not a good pick for a villain. In the episode he was featured in, I saw nothing evil about him. He just wanted Applejack to like him. Also, I feel like You adding Trenderhoof and Sunset Shimmer was a last minute thing. I thought the store was just going to be about Fluttershy and Discord falling in love. Now doesn't have a plot story about Count Trendethoof trying to to go over the town. But to be honest it's your story, you control it, not me. I just feel like the things I pointed out or just some flaws in it . But I still like it though it's pretty good. Keep up the good writing.
6925476 Um... you do get that Twi hates her, right? She would instantly see her as the one in her vision, and probably rip her throat out.
The Phantom Opra Discord references Love it:) please accept this moustache for writing another fantastic chapter
This is getting intense, I LOVE THIS STORY!
I can wait, take your time Df
6926193 I can see where you get that. However I think this is fitting for the story. Trenderhoof is a pony that can easily manipulate other ponies to his will and poses a legit threat to Fluttershy if he plays his cards right. I can see a scenario where he turns the entire town of Translavania on Discord, his friends, and Fluttershy and somehow they are all apprehended by the police. But I trust DF's storytelling skills and will enjoy whatever she writes
6926193 I know he's not like that. I just wanted to use someone other than Blueblood, and thought of what Trenderhoof might be like if he had an ulterior motive. And he was not a last-minute plot device. His arrival was planned from the start. Why else would I mention him and include him in the character tags? Sunset I thought of later, but still much earlier than when I put her in. And I can't just have Discord and Fluttershy falling in love. They need complications.
That was pretty interesting. I like where this is going.
Interesting very interesting. I like the relationship between Trenderhoof and Sunset, not that I ship them at all, it is a very interesting concept. I like how you had her still be against his actions, but whenever Trenderhoof orders her to do something, she has to. I hope that Sunset gets a happy ending by the end, and Trenderhoof gets what's coming toward him. Sunset is my third favorite character, only behind Luna and Twilight in that order.
the more I read this the more I wonder if any character will die off specifically. also congratulations you are the first story that I have commented on at this time.
THE PLOT THICKENS! BWAHAAHAAA
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Thank you for clearing that up. Can't wait for your next chapter DF.
Aaaaand Sunset will go, and she will be angry with her 'mate' and completely distracted from the task he set her...until, that is, she lays eyes on another unicorn inside the Count's house. She will be purple, with a navy mane and tail with a magenta and a pink stripe running through it. And she will know. She will know that she has made a mistake.
Or not. I'm just holing for a ray of sunlight in this dark, dark story (I'll go now)
Trenderhoof couldn't use his power on her, why is that he can't use it on her?
I love how you write Sunset here! You make her strong-willed and confident but not desperate for Trenderhoof to like her.
And the peace is ending for our couple!
This is getting interesting
I am not one to be annoying or pushy so sorry if i sound like that. You should make a new way for discord to be normal, but still a draconequus. Or, maybe have like Trenderhoof attack Fluttershy and then she turns vampire. (Sorry im evil) If neither of these things work, ok. I just want to help out! If you have a planned ending that sounds better to you, go ahead im excited for following chapters
New chapter!!!!!
More Fluttercord!!!!
6980091 Be patient. It's on the way.
6980160 yay!
Sorry i'm just excited how is gonna be Discord about the dinner surprise with Fluttershy, especially after their kiss!!!
Sorry again, i'll be patient. Promise. It is just that i love your stories!!!
Just saying disney, I like these stories better than your bride of discord series :P (sorry)
Yo he just got dunked on!!!!
If I remember correctly in one of your previous chapters Discord stated if one of the mates is mortal, and they where bound against the mortals will, the bond will be half complete and the mortal will become their mistress? Meaning that the mate that was originally the vampire has control over the other one? Did Sunset bound to Trenderhoof against her will? Cause he seems to make he do things against her will..... I'm just wondering.
Also, I love this series already! This story is so good.
So, did Fluttershy get a buff to her will save from hanging out with Discord and Co., or is it her own ability that nullified the mind control?
This is bloody good.
7431978 lol I'm sorry but I just thought of genocide route that's hi-frucjen-larious!
tenderhoof you about to get fucked up
I feel bad for Sunset. Hopefully she gets broken out of her slavery.
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Seriously?! Did you not pay attention? It LITERALLY says that he did.
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I appreciate your efforts, but apparently the user you replied to hasn't connected since 2017.