Just your average spanish bronie, I like terraria, half-life 2, the binding of isaac rebirth, wow, hearthstone and gmod
So here is your average history,I went to a convention and saw this guy selling an exact replica of the shrimpy truffle from terraria, next thing I know is that I black out.
After that I wake up, and see with me the guide form terraria and cute fishtron...
I should try not getting into trouble...
I'd like to thank shagohad12 and his fic http://www.fimfiction.net/story/210357/and-then-there-were-10er67 for inspiring me into writing one
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I FUCKIN LOVE THIS...MORE PLZ
(looks at the fishtron) hmmm when its somthing i love its usley kinda bad but then again from the story (in an act of protecting everyone, I ran out of the house saying my favourite phrase and personal motto:
"YOLO!!!")
Oh hey, look at that. Someone else decided to cash in on the idea of a Terraria Displaced! Coolio!
Edit: I know it's your first fic, but it could use some work. When going from dialogue to the phrase he/she/it said, don't use a dash. If it's just a little break to tell who's speaking, just put something like this:
"I don't plan on going anywhere," Bob said. "I'm going to stay in my room all night writing fan fiction, and you can't stop me!"
cant wait for next chapter.
6346555 thanks a lot
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I will start writing right on!
6346497 It's kinda my first fic, and my first language is not English, but I understand it's bad written
He seems like he already knows what's happining and is perfectly fine and not questioning how he woke up with fishtron and built a house in half an houre
6348966 I know. In a chapter later i'll explain he has a fanfiction.net account, and is an admin in 4chan
That's why he is so random and knows what Is happening
6349309 yeah when you put it that way id act the same way
6347016 (been offline and stuff yada yada) sorry if i was mean but cool story the only kinda downside is i dont know when the fishtron is talking and when the displaced guy talks
6362341 and found out there is a guide (sorry)
6362345 No worries, next chapter will be better. As a spoiler, it will be worth the weight
6363489 k (sorry that it took 1 hour for me to respond
This is a good story... But, have better grammar please! You forget to end sentences with quotation marks sometimes, mispell, AND USE THE SHOUTING STYLE OF TEXT WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY TOO MUCH! LIKE THIS,KINDA! YOU BORED OF IT YET? DUNNO. I CERTAINLY AM. JUST USE IT AT LEAST FOR ONE SENTENCE PER CHAPTER, FOR FUCKS SAKE! AUTISM MODE OFF! It could use work.
And punctuation, for the sake of the lord.
And why would they shout 'After it!' When obviously he is busy? Just see if anyone else is in the house, they could check. If not, just wait for him to come back!