Spike is just enjoying his peaceful day to himself. No worries and no cares. But that all changes for the worse when a white unicorn filly comes around and ruins everything. (Sappy teen movie trailer)
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Oh my god!
this was great,,,,, poor Spike got it going both ways.
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Huh.......more?
There's some grammatical errors and some improvements that you could add. Such as this:
There's a few grammatical errors in this. Such as at the end of there should be a question mark at the end of the first sentence.
But, aside from the grammatical errors, it's overall a nice story.
6520367 thanks. I'll fix it right know.
6520465 No problem.