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Goldbacon


Sometimes I write stories about cartoon horses. Other times I'm lazy. However, I'm definitely doing something related to cartoon horses at all times.

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Twilight Sparkle catches an unknown illness after a trip to the Zebra homeland with Zecora, and ends up hospitalized while she awaits a cure.

With the doctors lacking a diagnosis, and her future looking grim, she relies on those she loves for support.

Note: This is not meant to insult/express my views on religion or Atheism. It was just something I wanted to write after re-watching Celestia's ballad sometime in May.

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Edit: Revised 8/24/15. I did it late at night, and might revise it further after I wake up.

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I hope you handle tbis touchy subject well.

6303681 Well I certainly put more effort into this than any other story I've posted here thus far, particularly the only other one currently on my page.

This is indeed a touchy subject, and it needed to be handled with the utmost care. Basically, it's the one story that mattered enough for me to go back and re-read and revise over and over again, until I was happy that it read clearly and that I didn't go out and offend half of the internet.

Worst-case scenario would (hopefully) just be a few minor typos I happened to miss.

Love the story. :heart: It really makes you think about the different possibiites there could be after death and it shows you what a great relationship Spike and Twilight have with each other. I hope you made a sequel showing the other's reaction to Twilghts death and her visiting there dreams but that probably won't happen. Either way I love your story and hope you continue writing.:pinkiehappy:

6943527 Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I haven't considered a sequel before, but your suggestion is giving me a few ideas. If I do get around to writing one, I'll be sure to credit you as inspiration.

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