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The Last Sacrifice

After the lost of the Elements of Harmony, Equestria is throne into a deep war against the Shadows. Rarity has fought a lot and has tried a lot to save Equestria from any danger, but when she most Scarifice something important to save a close friend. Will she be able to do it or will feeling she thought will never happen, take over her.

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Doubt #1 · Jul 13th, 2015 · 1 · · What has Happened ·

After the lost of the Elements of Harmony, Equestria is throne into a deep war against the Shadows. Rarity has fought a lot and has tried a lot to save Equestria from any danger, but when she most Scarifice something important to save a close friend. Will she be able to do it or will feeling she thought will never happen, take over her.

I count eight errors right there. It's good practice to read over your work before posting it.

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freekyjester #2 · Jul 13th, 2015 · 1 · · What has Happened ·

I recommend reading over it for errors and maybe getting a friend to do so as well, because the more people checking, the less chance there is of anything slipping by.

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