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brzy
Short, sweet, slightly silly smut stories.
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I'm sorry, what? Did all your faculties fail you the minute you started writing something sexy? You swapped past tense for present, your words went askew somewhere in the process, and you stumbled over the 1000 word minimum finish line like you'd just finished a biathlon.
The *concept* of a Sunset Shimmer missing the smells of home and finding someone who smells good enough to rut is a passable one. But the execution leaves much to be desired.
What.
ponies bleed candy, ergo ponies ejaculate candy, ergo candy is sexual fluids. beautiful
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They did in fact leave me. It was written very quickly for a specific purpose, and as a result my parallel construction leaves much to be desired. I basically had a time limit and barely had time left for proofreading. Changing it now after the fact would kind of ruin the snapshot nature of it, even though it could really use it. Thanks for reading and commenting though.
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Whoopsie.
I don't agree that changing it would ruin the 'snapshot' nature, but that's up to you.
6119774 I don't think I can actually change it now anyways. Edit just seems to go to the main one. I took a bit more time proofreading the second chapter.
Why is everyone calling flash Brad? XD
6202849 I can't remember what started it. It happened right after the first EQG trailer came out. Google says maybe Silver Quill started it because he got tired of saying human Flash, and Meghan McCarthy tweeted about people calling him Brad. Frankly he looks more like a Brad than a Flash to me. Also he smells bad.
6202996 Well, I just find it funny. I might start doing it, too.
when is the update?
6288637 Sorry, this one I kinda have to be in the mood to write due to it being so sex candy filled.
Sunset, you slutty faggot.