Disliked for no reason. *after reading* LIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKEILIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKEILIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKEILIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKEILIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKEILIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELLIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKEILIKEIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKEILIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKEILIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKEILIKELIKELIKEILIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELILIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKEILIKEKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKELIKEILIKELIKELIKELIKEILIKE!!!!!!!!!!!
Basically, the plant feeds on cum juices? Unless something darker occurs with the plant, I don't think that ponies wouldn't know about it already, and if it's so good, its popularity would be through the roof. That was really dumb, but at least you knew it was. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Mr_Cake.png
Where's the dark tag? I think rape, no matter how much the victim likes it, still counts as rape. At least, nothing permanently bad happened to Rainbow... yet. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/eenope.png
Dude... Stop complaining! it's MY LITTLE PONY! nothing about any of these fanfics are realistic. That's why it's called 'fan fiction'. It's fictitious. Fake. NOT REAL. Good lordy... If you disliked it that damn much, don't read!
To the author...
Great work! Very great work. The artistic way you spoke of it made me just freak out because I could damn near see it.
622615 How could I tell if I liked it or not if I didn't read it? Your statement could be used against you, you know. It's called a critique. I can leave comments that state my opinion, right? Hey, if you don't like my comments, don't read them. See what I did there?
Besides, what this fic is implying is kind of scary, if you think about it. I concur with what 622512 stated, that would be interesting.
622716 So rape is okay as long as the rapist is gentle and the victim is drugged...what is this I don't even.
The writing is for the most part really quite good, very descriptive and immersive, so thumbs up for that. This does rather leave me in a quandary though, I...only really like clop that's either really funny, or really disturbing. I assumed this fell under the latter until I read the comments...and knowing now that it's meant simply to be sexy...I just don't know how I feel about it anymore. So...um...I think I'll just stick this on my read later list until I can decide how well I can forget how it's intended, or something like that...
But... I guess the non-consensual undertones do hold me back from liking it. I also agree with a lot of NaturalGlitch's criticisms. Could Dashie of all ponies be able to get restrained like that? Although, I suppose it's a fine story. I hate to be overly negative.
Oddly enough, I got the idea to do a fic sort of like in terms of topic (pony has sex with plants) at about the same time. But you wrote this first. I should credit you for giving me some side-ways inspiration for my own fic. So, thanks.
I'm really not much into rape and non-consensual stuff. Fluttershy rape in particular is just... I suppose I might get into it if I was a in really dark mood, but I'm not. I'll probably stop reading after this chapter.
1354261 Aw horseapples...now I've got that song stuck in my head! 622841 Good read, interesting concept, and seductive use of flora all add up to a fave!
If i wasn't reading this for the clop, i'd have noped the fuck out at, 'wings beating faster than the speed of light.' seriously? That brought me right out of the story. If they were actually beating that fast, the windforce alone would have shredded the plant. I mean, that'd be somewhere in the ballpark of a class 5 tornado in windspeed. So yeah. That is no. Other than that, i don't have any problems with this. I actually agree with RD being held captive so easily. She's strong, yeah, but not that strong. Everything impressive she does is due to her speed. She wouldn't have the room to reach destructive speeds inside the crown. So she's taken down a barn before. She also had the whole sky and a free fall to give her the momentum necessary to do that. In short, part of it sucked, the rest was fine.
You know, I love the idea of an aphrodisiac that works the way it's described here. After doing some research, however, I found this simply isn't possible. Guess that's why it's fiction, eh?
However, it would be just as feasible to use an aerosol style aphrodisiac. Those would work nearly instantly as well since it's being entered directly into the bloodstream through the lungs. Something to consider next time perhaps.
I still rather enjoyed the story, though, so please don't misinterpret this as distaste.
Damn impressive symbiotic flower/plant it takes nutriens and pheromones from its target but returns water levels as well es giving its sorce of food positiv reinforcment to build a selfsubstaining food cycle Its the plant version of a pure changling. Amazing Theme
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:D
Will read now
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aaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU D:......DO NOT WANT DO NOT WANT....
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WANT.
A strangely arousing story. I demand more at your earliest convenience.
Faved!
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tentacal rape LOL
What. The. Fuck?!
Disliked for no reason.
*after reading*
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At first I was like
Then I was like
Now I'm like
That was definitely a good read. I loved the whole idea of it all. Very brilliant indeed. Going to favorite this so I can reread for later. c:
This is terrible and you should feel terrible.
I'm not thumbing this up, and I most definitively will not fave this.
Nope.
Not faving this terrible work of art.
And by art, I mean not art, and nothing remotely good.
Yup.
*Click*
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Vinyl meets plant next.
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png You gave her flight capabilities to be faster than light, but yet she can't break free from a plant. This is the pony that propelled herself so hard that she obliterated a barn, and could even break the wooden boards like it was nonexistence, and an average pegasus pony's wings can lift over half a ton. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Rainbow_Dash.png
Basically, the plant feeds on cum juices? Unless something darker occurs with the plant, I don't think that ponies wouldn't know about it already, and if it's so good, its popularity would be through the roof. That was really dumb, but at least you knew it was. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Mr_Cake.png
Where's the dark tag? I think rape, no matter how much the victim likes it, still counts as rape. At least, nothing permanently bad happened to Rainbow... yet. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/eenope.png
Great, another thing to add to the list of why I'm going to hell. Thanks jerk.
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I agree that this should have the Dark tag. The implications are just horrifying.
I'd be interested in a sequel exploring her condition, say after she is removed from the plant and detoxified in Ponyville Hospital.
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Dude... Stop complaining! it's MY LITTLE PONY! nothing about any of these fanfics are realistic. That's why it's called 'fan fiction'. It's fictitious. Fake. NOT REAL. Good lordy... If you disliked it that damn much, don't read!
To the author...
Great work! Very great work. The artistic way you spoke of it made me just freak out because I could damn near see it.
622615 How could I tell if I liked it or not if I didn't read it? Your statement could be used against you, you know. It's called a critique. I can leave comments that state my opinion, right? Hey, if you don't like my comments, don't read them. See what I did there?
Besides, what this fic is implying is kind of scary, if you think about it. I concur with what 622512 stated, that would be interesting.
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Oh! My bad!
That...strangely was the first fic to arouse me...and I have read many clop fics....damn now I have to read something else to feel better
....Third clopfic that didnt make me laugh. CONGRATULATIONS!!! YOU JUST BECAM 20% COOLER IN 10 SECONDS FLAT!!
Me gust, want moar
i came
622716 So rape is okay as long as the rapist is gentle and the victim is drugged...what is this I don't even.
The writing is for the most part really quite good, very descriptive and immersive, so thumbs up for that. This does rather leave me in a quandary though, I...only really like clop that's either really funny, or really disturbing. I assumed this fell under the latter until I read the comments...and knowing now that it's meant simply to be sexy...I just don't know how I feel about it anymore. So...um...I think I'll just stick this on my read later list until I can decide how well I can forget how it's intended, or something like that...
I don't like non con, gotta give it a thumbs down
Well, this certainly was hot.
But... I guess the non-consensual undertones do hold me back from liking it. I also agree with a lot of NaturalGlitch's criticisms. Could Dashie of all ponies be able to get restrained like that? Although, I suppose it's a fine story. I hate to be overly negative.
Oddly enough, I got the idea to do a fic sort of like in terms of topic (pony has sex with plants) at about the same time. But you wrote this first. I should credit you for giving me some side-ways inspiration for my own fic. So, thanks.
I'm really not much into rape and non-consensual stuff. Fluttershy rape in particular is just... I suppose I might get into it if I was a in really dark mood, but I'm not. I'll probably stop reading after this chapter.
I was quite surprised to say the least... Now for the rest of the chapters
do applejack, big mac, or, maybe yourself! pleeeaaassee!!!
Look at what I found that matches this (almost) perfectly.//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rainbow_Dash_lolface.png
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1354261
Aw horseapples...now I've got that song stuck in my head!
622841
Good read, interesting concept, and seductive use of flora all add up to a fave!
If i wasn't reading this for the clop, i'd have noped the fuck out at, 'wings beating faster than the speed of light.' seriously? That brought me right out of the story. If they were actually beating that fast, the windforce alone would have shredded the plant. I mean, that'd be somewhere in the ballpark of a class 5 tornado in windspeed. So yeah. That is no.
Other than that, i don't have any problems with this. I actually agree with RD being held captive so easily. She's strong, yeah, but not that strong. Everything impressive she does is due to her speed. She wouldn't have the room to reach destructive speeds inside the crown. So she's taken down a barn before. She also had the whole sky and a free fall to give her the momentum necessary to do that.
In short, part of it sucked, the rest was fine.
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It appears youve created a list of potential plant rape victims.
You know, I love the idea of an aphrodisiac that works the way it's described here. After doing some research, however, I found this simply isn't possible. Guess that's why it's fiction, eh?
However, it would be just as feasible to use an aerosol style aphrodisiac. Those would work nearly instantly as well since it's being entered directly into the bloodstream through the lungs. Something to consider next time perhaps.
I still rather enjoyed the story, though, so please don't misinterpret this as distaste.
And this is the dark side of the pony fandom...
Tentacle rapes...
Damn impressive symbiotic flower/plant it takes nutriens and pheromones from its target but returns water levels as well es giving its sorce of food positiv reinforcment to build a selfsubstaining food cycle Its the plant version of a pure changling. Amazing Theme