"Her mind was perfectly clear- there were no unnatural poisons or mind control of any sort- but she couldn't help enjoying what the flower was doing to her."
I see what you did there in response to the comments about rape.
the plant seems both caring and demanding, if your willing then its nice and gentle, if you are not willing it will force you but still makes sure you are comfortable and not in pain, thats nice.....did it let rainbow dash out yet?....
666375 Well, for me, it's a bit...odd. Normally, I utterly despise the sexualisation of rape, but...this isn't rape by any stretch. If you submitted this into a court of law, they probably would determine that it isn't rape. HOWEVER, at the same time, it isn't exactly consensual. The plant can't understand language, and although the characters involved never made it clear that they didn't want it to happen, only Fluttershy attempted to make it obvious that she did. I still enjoyed it greatly, of course, but it's still a bit iffy for me. I'll still follow, of course.
672825 Forcing someone to have sex with you by drugging them is pretty much the definition of rape. Rainbow didn't want it, the plant ejected something into her, then she submitted, etc (Fluttershy was acting like a retard to begin with, and she's the kind that would submit (what the hell did I just type?), not to mention that she "agreed" with the plant after it injected her with an aphrodisiac).
This is rape, there's no getting around that. I mean, this story can be kinda cute, but the tags really give off a different impression before reading it, and this story has some scary implications. I mean, we don't even know if the plant let Rainbow go or not, it could just keep her and simply using her to feed off of her, only letting her eat and drink enough so that she wont die, but weak enough that she wont escape. It's just a plant that feeds on cum, and if the target doesn't comply, it forces them to do so.
679934 I meant in this story she's retarded, not her character in general. Who talks to plants like she did? Especially one that moves around, and in a place that, on multiple times, has tried to kill her (or change her, like the Poison Joke). "Oh hai plant that has large tendrils, how are you UNF UNF UNFUNF oh, you're violating me, how nice UNF UNF UNF hey, is that Rainbows drained and decomposing body UNF UNF UNF!" I mean, come on dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Fluttershy.png .
679967 I don't know; I would be cautious on a semi sentient plant ( especially one that's moving around. for all she knows; it shoots venom into a victim's eyes and paralyses them to be eaten) in a location that, every time I ever went in there, something horrible happened to me or my friends.
I know Fluttershy is kind of naive, but her behavior here is borderline mental deficiency.
680046 Oh, that's easy. You just find an image you like, right click it, then left click on View Image, next you copy the url, go back to the comment page, click the icon that looks like it has a picture in it (the one next to the anchor) and pastes the url, and done!
Just be sure the image isn't too big, not a whole lot of people like that. Try it out if you want, but be certain it isn't explicit or anything, wouldn't want to get banned or anything like that.
680116 A easier way would be to click on Copy Image Location instead of View Image, it would a bit faster. Then click the image icon, paste it, and you should be good to go.
Hmm...Do I sense a suggestion for Twilight in Chapter Three?
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You know, everypony could just go back and forth on the issue all day and all night. I just prefer to think of this fic being in a gray area, accept it as clop, and move on. I enjoy this fic because I find tentacle action to be one of my naughty fetishes. Can't we just agree that this is plain, good ol'-fashioned clop and enjoy it? On that note, good job with this fic. Carry on.
1275655 Criticism isn't dumb. Well, it can be, but NaturalGlitch makes a lot of perfectly valid points (and a lot of not so great ones, but I digress). I have to agree that the acts of the plant on Rainbow Dash were effectively rape. I don't understand why the author is so annoyed by people saying that, since Dash wasn't receptive until after resisting and being initially violated.
So, there are multiple plants, huh? I'm guessing Rainbow's "energy" was used to make the second one, which caught Fluttershy, who will now give her "energy" to make another, and so on and so forth until the entirety of the world is covered in pleasure plants.
sooooo goooodddd!!!!
We have Rainbow Ravished. We have Flutterrape. Now we need the rest of the Mane 6.
nice a two part by the look of it keep it up
"Her mind was perfectly clear- there were no unnatural poisons or mind control of any sort- but she couldn't help enjoying what the flower was doing to her."
I see what you did there in response to the comments about rape.
the plant seems both caring and demanding, if your willing then its nice and gentle, if you are not willing it will force you but still makes sure you are comfortable and not in pain, thats nice.....did it let rainbow dash out yet?....
So its Sentient....Well this demands further study. Please continue good sir!
Good.
Definitely the best clop I've read in a long time
You keep up that good work sir. No haters here will get past my troll army.
666375
Well, for me, it's a bit...odd. Normally, I utterly despise the sexualisation of rape, but...this isn't rape by any stretch. If you submitted this into a court of law, they probably would determine that it isn't rape. HOWEVER, at the same time, it isn't exactly consensual. The plant can't understand language, and although the characters involved never made it clear that they didn't want it to happen, only Fluttershy attempted to make it obvious that she did. I still enjoyed it greatly, of course, but it's still a bit iffy for me. I'll still follow, of course.
672825 Forcing someone to have sex with you by drugging them is pretty much the definition of rape. Rainbow didn't want it, the plant ejected something into her, then she submitted, etc (Fluttershy was acting like a retard to begin with, and she's the kind that would submit (what the hell did I just type?), not to mention that she "agreed" with the plant after it injected her with an aphrodisiac).
This is rape, there's no getting around that. I mean, this story can be kinda cute, but the tags really give off a different impression before reading it, and this story has some scary implications. I mean, we don't even know if the plant let Rainbow go or not, it could just keep her and simply using her to feed off of her, only letting her eat and drink enough so that she wont die, but weak enough that she wont escape. It's just a plant that feeds on cum, and if the target doesn't comply, it forces them to do so.
679706 you, sir, are an ass for calling fluttershy 'retarded'
679934 I meant in this story she's retarded, not her character in general. Who talks to plants like she did? Especially one that moves around, and in a place that, on multiple times, has tried to kill her (or change her, like the Poison Joke). "Oh hai plant that has large tendrils, how are you UNF UNF UNF UNF oh, you're violating me, how nice UNF UNF UNF hey, is that Rainbows drained and decomposing body UNF UNF UNF!" I mean, come on dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Fluttershy.png .
679959 well... its not her fault... she likes plants... like that...
679967 I don't know; I would be cautious on a semi sentient plant ( especially one that's moving around. for all she knows; it shoots venom into a victim's eyes and paralyses them to be eaten) in a location that, every time I ever went in there, something horrible happened to me or my friends.
I know Fluttershy is kind of naive, but her behavior here is borderline mental deficiency.
679989 sorry...
680001 Ah, think nothing of it. Here, about a picture of a hug?:
Look out, incoming FlutterHugs!!
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680010 Herp-A-Derp-Apottamus
680026 Don't know what that means, Google isn't helping either. Whatever. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png
680038 i said that because i don't know how to post images
680046 Oh, that's easy. You just find an image you like, right click it, then left click on View Image, next you copy the url, go back to the comment page, click the icon that looks like it has a picture in it (the one next to the anchor) and pastes the url, and done!
Just be sure the image isn't too big, not a whole lot of people like that. Try it out if you want, but be certain it isn't explicit or anything, wouldn't want to get banned or anything like that.
like this? [img]Capture[/img]
680115 screw it...
680116 A easier way would be to click on Copy Image Location instead of View Image, it would a bit faster. Then click the image icon, paste it, and you should be good to go.
647694
I have a nice mansion in the nicer districts of the Seventh Layer. Has a nice lava-lake-side view, too. Drop by my place and have a brewski.
663778
Hmm...Do I sense a suggestion for Twilight in Chapter Three?
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You know, everypony could just go back and forth on the issue all day and all night. I just prefer to think of this fic being in a gray area, accept it as clop, and move on. I enjoy this fic because I find tentacle action to be one of my naughty fetishes. Can't we just agree that this is plain, good ol'-fashioned clop and enjoy it? On that note, good job with this fic. Carry on.
Do Film Reel at some point. That'd be awesome.
1275655
Criticism isn't dumb. Well, it can be, but NaturalGlitch makes a lot of perfectly valid points (and a lot of not so great ones, but I digress). I have to agree that the acts of the plant on Rainbow Dash were effectively rape. I don't understand why the author is so annoyed by people saying that, since Dash wasn't receptive until after resisting and being initially violated.
I was honestly expecting Angel to go, "My ass is on fire! My ass is on fire! My ass is on fire!"
So, there are multiple plants, huh? I'm guessing Rainbow's "energy" was used to make the second one, which caught Fluttershy, who will now give her "energy" to make another, and so on and so forth until the entirety of the world is covered in pleasure plants.
This Story have endless potencial of sexual and non sexual topics