Oh poor, poor AJ. The whole town is gonna know thanks to Berry. Also, I do forsee Flim at the very least being in some kind of physical pain in the near future.
Why all the killing sentence why can't she just love him he also needs love sometimes and applejack is such a loving southern girl wondering if her parents were alive if they had just gone out trying to find him and stick a sawed off shotgun to his back and gave two options
1. Marry her and not get killed
2. Don't marry her and half your body flies a cupple of meters
3354475 Rarely before have I seen a more appropriate avatar for a comment/fic. Given the occurrences of this story so far and everypony's reactions, there may in fact be no survivors.
However I still hold out hope for FlimJack. Well-done crackships are hooves-down the best ships.
Hm. That was interesting, to say the least. In hindsight, maybe 'Piano Man' wasn't the best song to play over a semi-humorous story. On the other hoof, the only song I know that is intrinsically funny is fuckin' 'Yakety Sax'.
I'm not entirely sure what will happen when AJ or Mac finally meet face to face with Flim and Flam again, but I'd sure be willing to buy tickets!
Also I bet that part of the reason why Mac is so angry at Applejack is because she made the same mistake that he did, instead of learning from it. My guess is half of it is that he's angry with himself.
that is a big problem these days. young whippersnappers don't read the darn instructions. but in all seriousness, wow, harsh. This chapter was very heavy on the feels. but not little pansy-type crying feels, I mean like these moments really know how to play with one's emotions. I'm not one to get all "feelsy", and I'll be honest I didn't get all feelsy here, but I know what emotions we were supposed to feel and you went about it the right way. They weren't really cheap ways to get us to feel sad they were legitimate real life problems that happen today, they were real life conversations one would have with another family member. If there's one thing I love in stories, its how realistic the problem is and how realistically it is treated. Most stories like this would make it all happy and oh no problems here, everyone's ok and there's definitely no emotional hardship because friendship is magic. But you, you do something special here, and I like it, a lot. I think it's also how realistically you captured just life in general, it's not all happy, it's not all sad; you balance the moments really well, combining humor and very heavy, serious topics. and I think I might have just figured out why I liked the scene with Flim and AJ in the bathroom as he's trying to get his nose to stop bleeding. It's probably all those things I said before, but it was also how they interacted, their exchanges and reactions. Applejack wasn't completely pissed off that he just pushed her aside to get to the sink she was surprised then concerned, Flim was pissed off, but from what I gathered, pretty forgiving about AJ slamming the door into his face since she didn't really mean to cause him that much harm. The characters fluctuate into different emotions so smoothly and realistically, it's amazing really. Now, I'm wondering how Flam reacts when he finds out just who Flim was having so much fun with that night.
I loved this chapter so much it had me cracking up Flim is funny I like him.I can't wait to see what happens next this just keeps getting better and better.
So. If I'm not mistaken, MacIntosh is being a big hypocrite right now.
Keep up the great work, friend!
Meanwhile, Berry Punch is proving the old adage:
"Telephone, telegraph, tell a neighbor . . . "
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You do that...
Good luck with your stories! I can't wait to read more from you!
This just gets better and better...
~Skeeter The Lurker
Oh poor, poor AJ. The whole town is gonna know thanks to Berry. Also, I do forsee Flim at the very least being in some kind of physical pain in the near future.
Well shit...
Imma follow this.
*grins evilly and holds down both Flim Flam brothers for her* Wanna borrow my bonesaw?
Why all the killing sentence why can't she just love him he also needs love sometimes and applejack is such a loving southern girl wondering if her parents were alive if they had just gone out trying to find him and stick a sawed off shotgun to his back and gave two options
1. Marry her and not get killed
2. Don't marry her and half your body flies a cupple of meters
Well this is interesting...
3354475 Rarely before have I seen a more appropriate avatar for a comment/fic. Given the occurrences of this story so far and everypony's reactions, there may in fact be no survivors.
However I still hold out hope for FlimJack. Well-done crackships are hooves-down the best ships.
Oh, Good Lord, this won't end well.
Finally got around to reading this. Damn good. Looking forward to more.
Hm. That was interesting, to say the least.
In hindsight, maybe 'Piano Man' wasn't the best song to play over a semi-humorous story. On the other hoof, the only song I know that is intrinsically funny is fuckin' 'Yakety Sax'.
Have a like, a follow, and a .
I'm not entirely sure what will happen when AJ or Mac finally meet face to face with Flim and Flam again, but I'd sure be willing to buy tickets!
Also I bet that part of the reason why Mac is so angry at Applejack is because she made the same mistake that he did, instead of learning from it. My guess is half of it is that he's angry with himself.
Still not a no to the pregnancy. Still holdin' out~
Good story, nice thing about the Flowers to, White Carnations are a flower of disdain and refusal lol
Glad you're still pumpin' this fucker out! Hope Applejack has just as much luck if she's got a bun a-brewin' in the oven!
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Man, I cannot wait to see Flim's reaction.
that is a big problem these days. young whippersnappers don't read the darn instructions.
but in all seriousness, wow, harsh. This chapter was very heavy on the feels. but not little pansy-type crying feels, I mean like these moments really know how to play with one's emotions. I'm not one to get all "feelsy", and I'll be honest I didn't get all feelsy here, but I know what emotions we were supposed to feel and you went about it the right way. They weren't really cheap ways to get us to feel sad they were legitimate real life problems that happen today, they were real life conversations one would have with another family member. If there's one thing I love in stories, its how realistic the problem is and how realistically it is treated. Most stories like this would make it all happy and oh no problems here, everyone's ok and there's definitely no emotional hardship because friendship is magic. But you, you do something special here, and I like it, a lot. I think it's also how realistically you captured just life in general, it's not all happy, it's not all sad; you balance the moments really well, combining humor and very heavy, serious topics.
and I think I might have just figured out why I liked the scene with Flim and AJ in the bathroom as he's trying to get his nose to stop bleeding. It's probably all those things I said before, but it was also how they interacted, their exchanges and reactions. Applejack wasn't completely pissed off that he just pushed her aside to get to the sink she was surprised then concerned, Flim was pissed off, but from what I gathered, pretty forgiving about AJ slamming the door into his face since she didn't really mean to cause him that much harm. The characters fluctuate into different emotions so smoothly and realistically, it's amazing really.
Now, I'm wondering how Flam reacts when he finds out just who Flim was having so much fun with that night.
I loved this chapter so much it had me cracking up Flim is funny I like him.I can't wait to see what happens next this just keeps getting better and better.
Mac seriously needed both AJ's back hooves buried in his nuts in this chapter.
There would be a much larger surprise If this story wasn't in the forefront of the Impregnation group.