Enjoyable chapter. You're a good writer. It's a real shame you only update once a year. Though if anyone understands the perpetual struggle with motivation, it's me.
and the downside to being the element of honesty AJ, it'll all come out eventually. hot damn this story is amazing! I love this so much. Thus far this is the only clopfic that's actually managed to keep my attention for several chapters. The characters are portrayed amazingly. It's so well written, it's so god damn funny, it can be unpredictable, unfortunately I found this story through the sequel, which I plan to read, so I already knew who the mystery guy was but in all honesty it made it so much more entertaining. that joke about Pokey being gay was so out of the blue for me that I had to take a minute to calm down before I could keep reading. I never thought of him as gay, but now I do Oh Applejack, you gonna get it now.
"Prince blueblood?" Hey my second favorite applejack ship got mentioned! It was dissed but at least mentioned. We learned even before discord switched her element that shes not the best at lying for long.
"One, I ain't even sure if he's got me in trouble! Two, I don't gotta pee, so neither of us are gonna know for awhile yet! Three, t'ain't none a'yer business who he is! Four, there ain't no way under Celestia's sun I'm-a marry him! Five, even if y'do make me marry him, there ain't no way I'm gonna travel around sellin' cider with him and his stupid twin brother!!" stuffpoint.com/my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic/image/75890-my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic-big-mac-angry.png
I loved it all another awesomely funny and awesome for the sake of awesome.it was so sweet how close they are brother and sister they should just like me and my Sisters.And it was so funny after all that AJ just busted her salf.I can't wait to see what happens next.
This, I love. I'd forgotten this story.
Enjoyable chapter. You're a good writer. It's a real shame you only update once a year. Though if anyone understands the perpetual struggle with motivation, it's me.
Whoops! Tooooo soon Applejack.
But... Maybe she can blame that on the whole Honesty Element thing...
~Skeeter The Lurker
Quite enjoyable if I do say so myself, though I find it strange that applejack can put both hooves over her mouth without falling on her face.
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Must have taken lessons from Pinkie Pie.
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OH MY GAWSH I JUST FOUND SKEETER!
I see a severe lack of upvotes on your comments.
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Yes. You have found me.
Your reward is a recommendation to read this fic.
~Skeeter The Lurker
OOPS.
Oh Jackie Jackie Jackie. You got some 'SPLAININ ta do!
Oh. Dear. She done let the cat right outta that there bag.
Also, zero, she's got a fancy necklace that says she is an honest mare.
I have no idea why that made me laugh so much...
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uh...ok
(A recommendation to read the fic I am now in the comment section of...)
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Yep. That's right.
I mean... Why not?
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Second read? Are you MAD man?!
I have never heard of such a thing.
*reads again*
HOLY PRETZLES! I should do this more often!
This gonna be good.
I goddamn lost it.
Glad to see you continue this, hun
Who's a silly pony?
You're a silly pony!
Who is?
You are, Applejack!
and the downside to being the element of honesty AJ, it'll all come out eventually.
hot damn this story is amazing! I love this so much. Thus far this is the only clopfic that's actually managed to keep my attention for several chapters. The characters are portrayed amazingly. It's so well written, it's so god damn funny, it can be unpredictable, unfortunately I found this story through the sequel, which I plan to read, so I already knew who the mystery guy was but in all honesty it made it so much more entertaining. that joke about Pokey being gay was so out of the blue for me that I had to take a minute to calm down before I could keep reading. I never thought of him as gay, but now I do
Oh Applejack, you gonna get it now.
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Wow, thank you so much! Your comment really meant a lot to me.
"Prince blueblood?"
Hey my second favorite applejack ship got mentioned! It was dissed but at least mentioned.
We learned even before discord switched her element that shes not the best at lying for long.
"I BEG YOUR PARDON?!"
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"One, I ain't even sure if he's got me in trouble! Two, I don't gotta pee, so neither of us are gonna know for awhile yet! Three, t'ain't none a'yer business who he is! Four, there ain't no way under Celestia's sun I'm-a marry him! Five, even if y'do make me marry him, there ain't no way I'm gonna travel around sellin' cider with him and his stupid twin brother!!"
stuffpoint.com/my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic/image/75890-my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic-big-mac-angry.png
I loved it all another awesomely funny and awesome for the sake of awesome.it was so sweet how close they are brother and sister they should just like me and my Sisters.And it was so funny after all that AJ just busted her salf.I can't wait to see what happens next.
This train [wreck] has no brakes.
BUSTED!!! like a 100x BUSTED AJ
clearly not careful to spill the beans