Ahahahahaha, nice.

Talk about your awkward mornings. I almost would have called it complete as is, but I'm sure any continuation would be amusing and since it's marked incomplete....

YOU SERIOUS !?!?!?
i laughed my boner off at the end

what is this I don't even.

Did NOT see that comin'! You get a fave for pullin' THAT one off. Dear sweet Celestia...

Was not expecting THAT . You deserve my fave and my upvote. Well done.

NICE! can we have an epilog to know what happens after?

Hahahahaha! Hilarious. That's what can happen when you drink too much.

Do I hear a shotgun wedding? that's one way to get the farm

This was absolutely hilarious and boneriffic. Loled so fucking hard at the ending.

OH FUCK! Thats gonna be hard to explain!

Wow, thanks everybody! I really appreciate the comments since this is my first attempt at a FIMfic.
>>MyLittlePillager
Thanks! I wondered if anybody would pick up on that. Churchill's a great source for bitchy comebacks

>>mizu-okami15
Originally I had this pegged as Complete, but then I started getting ideas about what it would be like for AJ to make her way back into a tiny town where gossip probably flies fast...

Fucking fantastic. Keep this up.

Oh wow. I think the only time I laughed harder at clop than this was Luna's Safeword. That puts you in truly legendary company, imo. And gosh darn it, AJ's characterization is perfect. It's really rare to see a fic actually both focus on her and get her right, for some reason.

Have a very well-earned fav. And you wouldn't happen to have any recommendations for other good Applejack fics, would you?

Wow! That was really great written, you captured AJ very well. At least, that's how I suppose she is ;) Not much of a fan of Flim, but it's something new, that has to be said.
I hope you write more :)

I have too say that was one of the funniest fics i read and great imagination

Damn, that realisation moment, couldn't stop laughing

Loved.

one word: MOAR

Awesome. My running theory (full of holes, mind you) was that it was Fancy Pants. But that... just
I'm also a sucker for ApplejackxAnyone. Your characterization was spot on. Like/faved/subbed.

Nice twist there. Oh man, I love it when clops can be funny.

awesome. just. friggin. AWESOME. i laughed my head off at the ending

Grammar is off, weird choices of words, AJ's accent coming and going... this is good, but needs a decent overhaul.

700944
Fair enough. I wanted to suggest at her accent rather than always spelling it out, but if that reads as it disappearing, I'll try something different next time. Any words in particular you thought were weird/out of place? My OCD wants to know for future ref

701409 Well, it was pretty good for the most part, just a bit more slang, but it would be a good idea to take her down a notch for most of the time. There's transcripts of the episodes that you could use for reference, if you like. AJ's dialect is hard to write for, I found that out the hard way.

There's a fanfic here called "Applejack's Clopping Partner" (clopping means dancing in that fic, by the way), and I feel that it's a decent example of how AJ talks. I'm not saying you should copy it, but having a reference could help.

We know how she sounds like, so a bit more subtlety would be a good idea (in my opinion, anyway), but not so much where we don't know she's the one talking.

You did a very good Applejack, by the way, I don't want to come across as negative here.

I did not see that ending coming. And that's high praise coming from me.

you mean she had sex with
poor applejack

It would be interesting to see how this story progresses. This is a pairing that I have not seen before.

What... But... You...

Oh my fucking god.

THAT came completely out of left field!

LOVE IT!

~Skeeter The Lurker

Oh crap...this should be interesting.

Whoaa!! Loving this so far!

Well, she's boned. In many ways. I'm not sure how you managed to stretch this out so long but I'm sure it's brilliant. and i like that she got pregnant. I may not be much for "shipping the Mane Six' aside from some classics, but I'm such a giany impregnophile.

Should have been Flam. One word: moustache.

I loved it all the end had me LOTF I can't wait to see what happens next.

Shit! film and flam?!

haha! Omg, I love it!

The Reveal at the end is PRICELESS. GO FLIM!

Or was it Flam?

If you keep this up for next chapter I WILL favourite it.

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...Keep what up?

Twins? That.... no. NO

"Mister, you're ugly," she shot back. Then she couldn't help but add "And tomorrow morning, I'll be sober."

A Winston Churchill quote/reference? Rock on!

But... twins... TWINS? You mean...

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

...

Just replace stewie and the revolver with Big Mac and a shotgun