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Starshine, Starbright

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Meet Cottonball, a cat who seems simple during the day, but at night, her dreams take place in a world of magical equines. But soon it all seems so real to her, she doesn't know wich is reality, the day, or the night?

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Chapter 1: I have hooves apperantly · 3rd Jun 2015 · 1,166 words
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Chapter 2: Banned Magic and Dimension Hopping · 4th Jun 2015 · 960 words
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Canary In The Coal Mine

Canary In The Coal Mine #1 · Jun 3rd, 2015 · · · Chapter 1: I have hooves apperantly ·

There are errors that should have been caught in a read through before posting, if not an aggressive spell checker. It almost looks like it was written from a tablet or mobile with autocorrect aggressively on. Dog nut indeed.

As for the story, I have to admit I was expecting a domesticated cat rather than an anthropomorphized one.

cottonball

cottonball #2 · Jun 3rd, 2015 · · · Chapter 1: I have hooves apperantly ·

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It is a domesticated cat, just acts like a human. No walking on two legs here ^u^ But yah, I used a computer, but I was being a bit fast on spell checker because I was in a rush. I am still a beginner at writing and stuff. But I appreciate your note! I'll make sure to do better in the next chapters ^u^

cottonball

cottonball #3 · Jan 16th, 2016 · · · Chapter 2: Banned Magic and Dimension Hopping ·

6052716 EDIT Yes, I realized the cat is anthro, but not walking on two legs XD But I'd love to hear what you liked about the story as well, so I know what to keep :D